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Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03 (Page 76)

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
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This is one if the most well-written stories on IF. Sacchi Clap
 
Next, I feel sorry for Anjali. First she chose to be blind. Now she is forced (by DM) to be blind. Iss raat ki subah nahi??? Ouch
 
In spite of everything, I dont know why I feel there is still hope, a chance for Anjali to have happiness. Coz Avinash cares.
 
Now Arnav and Khushi.
 
Arnav wants to treat her like a procelain doll- some one whom he can caress and pamper, shower love on and take her pain away. Her very presence is enough to put him in a good mood.
 
But our Khushi who has always been a very hardworking girl wants to earn the money she is being paid instead of just getting it. Such a contrast to her last stint in AR where she was abused in the name of work.
 
He wants to have coffee because he wants to woo her. She wants to have coffee with him because well she wants to, her heart wants to and at the same time she doesnt want to as it would be betraying the memory of the person her heart knows she loves. Sorry, but I found this situation very funny LOL
 
So, he is not taking no for an answer and neither am I. Bring the date sooon Big smile


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 18 March 2013 at 1:15am

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Wowww nice one

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:04am | IP Logged
will unres tomorrow morning! :P

technically, it is still a morning! :)

Sooo... I had to go back and read the last chapter to refresh my mind. And oh god, Anjali's pain came rushing back! 

"Sometimes God has to break us to make us. Its just a bend, its not the end. We're all like glow sticks, no matter how much we're bent and broken our light still shines."

My heart completely goes out to Anjali. The poor woman is still suffering, sometimes from loving too much, and sometimes by loving too less. She just haven't had a chance to breathe and relax her mind. She is still haunted by her past, and she's lost with her present. And her husband is not making any better. It is a new relationship, and she was just shattered from her last relationship, he cannot expect her to jump on his arms right away! And what is with this 'I love you' phone calls? But for some reason, I don't think there is another woman involved. But I can't confirm that either, can I?

I loved how you explained Khushi and Arnav's scene! It was perfect. I found this scene to be completely aligned with their characters. Although Khushi lost her memory, I am sure she would still have a hard time staying idle. After all, it's Arnav's Khushi we're talking about! She cannot even sit quietly for 5 minutes, and she has to bear that silence for 8 long hours at work? Devi maiyaa raksha karna!!!

And oh god, can I kidnap Arnav and keep him for myself? I swear, I will be as crazy an Khushi! I will give him all my love and care, and I will eat channas too! and gol gappes! and jump on bed! and pour orange juice on his shoes! and wear red sarees!!!! He WILL fall in love with me!!!

ps. sorry for this late un-res. :D


Edited by aycma98 - 19 March 2013 at 2:41am

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
this concept is there even in my story but the diff is that they have kids... haha very cliche!

anyway. I liked this update a lot :)
Khushi is so cute! and the faceless lover part? I found it kinda romantic... yeah I know m weird ?;)

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
I feel sorry for Avinash.. Avinash has a misunderstanding like Arnav did.. he acts a lot like arnav.. he can't see Anji in pain but is still punishing her for something..

Arnav is trying so hard..but he called for it.. i love the way the story is going..

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Nice one harshiii...khushi is doing nothing at office but has been given random files...thats so nice...

No thoughts on anjalu and avinash!!!

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Faceless lover huh! Intersting.. Khushi bitiya ur FL is in front of u dear!
A I ash don't be a jerk!

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Oww!! 

That was lovely!! 
Arnav wooing her back!! its fun to know! 

Bechari Khushi!! but i am liking it... he he he... 
have come across various FFs ... but this is one of its kinds! :)

Thanks for the update!! :)

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