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Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03 (Page 67)

acklesmanic Senior Member

Joined: 18 August 2012
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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Firstly I would like to thank Lyraa for the pm without which I would have missed this wonderful story unfold.

Now coming to the update it was lovely.
The opening lines were mind blowing..!! Wonder which one of u came up with that.
lovely to see that khushi remembers him in her heart, subconsciously It shows that her life with Arnav was not always filled with hurtful, sardonic taunts and also trust issues from him but also with the seldom displayed love from him and also his protection, which has left an imprint on her heart and it shows.

Anjali, loved see her learn her lessons, just hope she'd move on and have a wonderful life ahead.
And as of Anjali, Avinash and their relationship, it has a lot of similarities with that of Arnav and khushi's love hate relationship. But what i don't get is Anivash cheating on her. Is he?? if he is it will break my heart 4 anjali.

Loved the whole Office wala scene where we get to see his desperation to see her, hold her, care for her. I guess he needs to work on his anger management more than anything cause that's one of the main reasons that pushed her out of his life but his care, his fears were beautifully portrayed.

I know most of it is all blabbering, forgive me...!!! Embarrassed

Edited by acklesmanic - 03 March 2013 at 10:49pm

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ekiholo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
nice one

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soppy Senior Member

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
love love love this story!
update soon!
please pm me when you do

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sonia_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
awww, adorable chapter. the whole saving the kid thing, so khushi.

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angeldream14 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
ASR wants her back using his second chance
Anjali shld nt had got married again ruining  a life

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ASR6262 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Welcome back dear
Awesome update very interesting
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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Diva_Akorshi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
very nice part...

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Aahana- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Gosh! How come I missed the previous two chapters? I read them now along with this new one and your story is amazing :D 

I absolutely love it. Love everything about it. Love the new Payal. She's amazing. And Anjali and Avinash's story is so interesting. It makes you want to read more. 

I hope Arnav is successful in giving Khushi all the love and happiness that he wants to give her but I even hope that she doesn't get hurt in the process. 

Can't wait for the next part to be up. Waiting eagerly :) xxx

Edited by Aahanaxx11 - 03 March 2013 at 12:15pm

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