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Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03 (Page 52)

Rasgulla_sp IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
First I love your Payal. The proper combination of care and guts. And as a sister I know the violent protectiveness that can seep into the system to get best for your sister and to keep her safe from every wrong.
But also understand the helplessness. Payal wants for Khushi what Khushi would want fpr herself. And I liked it that though Payal is anti-Arnav right now, she had the sense to back off.
I pity Aakash but then Devyani Raizada looks like the perfect bridge between PayAsh
Lastly Arnav. This update just proved that ASR will do anything and fight against anything to win Khushi... So I can relax there...
But how will Khushi take all this??? Ouch

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 27 February 2013 at 11:49pm

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aycma98 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged


Whooopp!!! Whooppp!!! First page!!!! :)

Anyways, going back to the story... 
I have told you before, and I am telling you again, Payal is a force to be reckoned with! And I am glad she took this measure to guard her sister. Payal that I have seen, needed a good push to speak loudly, and to see her with a backbone that can break anyone *cough Arnav cough* is very entertaining! She is extremely frustrated with Arnav, and Aakash's presence is not helping either! Poor girl, I won't be surprised if she starts balding with stress and will need a therapist soon! The two brothers are going to be the death of her!

Oh Arnav, he hasn't climbed the ladder to success for no reason, if his sleekness doesn't come in handy in getting his way! He has arrogance, confidence, and stubbornness, can Payal really stand a chance against Arnav? I loved how he blatantly refused to leave Khushi out of his life. I was laughing so hard with his argument with Payal regarding Khushi. Payal needs to learn a lot from Arnav to be able to get under his skin. A quality that only Khushi has achieved. 

"And even though Arnav's eyebrow had raised when he had heard her swear, his face remained impassive as he said, "I came for Khushi." Just that. As bluntly as possible." I can read this line over, and over again, and it'll still be amusing to me! It just shows how stubborn Arnav can get. He is like a little stubborn child, who cries and argues, and throws tantrum when things don't go his way. And the only way to shut him up, is to give exactly what he wants- and in Arnav's case, his love, Khushi.

I can't even start with Aakash! He is slowly learning to speak his thoughts against his brother, and show his grudges, but when Arnav is busy thinking about Khushi, Aakash's words just flies through his head. I really hope the two brothers will gang up together to get their wife! Payal snapping at Aakash is nothing new, but I loved how she sarcastically rejected his plea to go home. 

Whatever happened to mama and mami???? They are nowhere to be seen... 

Edited by aycma98 - 28 February 2013 at 12:38am

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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged

Hey HarshuHug

So here I am with my comment


So Shollyy for late edit

Was busy with somethingEmbarrassed


Now coming to the update

Well, beautifully written as usual


I am just loving this Payal more and more with each chapter

Her strength and care toward her sister is remarkable yaar


 And of course the way she speak to Arnav and Aakash

Poor boys, hope they soon get use to this PayalLOL


And what can I say about our ASR

Love his confidence & determination to brink his life, his Khushi backThumbs Up


The way he influence Payal's mind and divert her decision in his favor

Total ASRlicious, He is ASR after allTongue


And ab jab usne decide kar hi liya hai toh we all know that

He can go to any extent to achieve it


Let's see how he will tackle this situation


Really looking forward to read more


So do try to continue soon


Thanks for the PM
Take care


Lots of Love



Edited by sweetdesire - 28 February 2013 at 11:27pm

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anjs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
awesome  update...i loved this ASR...whatever he has done in the past, this time he is good...its good that he didnt give Payal the chance to decide...cause whatever it is, shud be decided by Khushi and not Payal, cause its her life and his life is connected to her...

good going...

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Amanram IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Liked that chapter - let's see how arnav wooes khushi out of her amnesiaWink

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preethi.saseeda IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
a fierce payal is a delight to read... the best part was she telling akash that she has not lost her memories and that was really a good one... payal using the "F" word to the man who thinks who owns it... wah kya writing... i enjoy this payal so much...

ASR using his business brain to convince payal and make her understand that she cannot decide for her sister was so beautifully written.. everything was so perfectly presented and i should tell you that you are a very talented writer... loved it and thankss.. 

Edited by preethi.saseeda - 01 March 2013 at 4:29am

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-memorable- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 12:05am | IP Logged
am loving it

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Viji79 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Just loved it. Loved Payal. And arnav is actually right. Khushi can only love him, amnesia or not. Didn't she actually not think of him before slipping into slumber?

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