Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03 (Page 43)

Rasgulla_sp IF-Stunnerz
Rasgulla_sp
Rasgulla_sp

Joined: 16 January 2012
Posts: 33261

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:15am | IP Logged
r
 
Edited:
 
Amazing, amazing story.
 
I can already anticipate how amazing this story will turn out to be.
 
I can feel Arnav's pain and Aakash's rebellion, Payal's disdain and the Gupta family's helplessness.
 
And Avinash and Anjali is a completely unexpected package. In her last marriage, she had given so much and her husband was unappreciative. In this marriage, her husband is giving so much but she is being unappreciative.
 
Add to all this Khushi's amnesia. Her lack of awareness of all the love and hurt that happened.
 
I loved the pace of the story. So much happens in one update.
 
Now that Arnav knows I wonder will he directly try to woo her or as he does that he will simultaneously disclose the hurt he has caused her too.
 
The best part about this story is the all pervasive feeling of hope. And you are writing it beautifully.
 
I can't wait for more Star


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 26 February 2013 at 12:14am

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

Chanyaforever-_-harsh42Hina69honey-sweety

anjs IF-Sizzlerz
anjs
anjs

Joined: 03 September 2011
Posts: 18078

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
wow...very interesting update... liked this  Payal with a spine... but she will definitely come between Arnav and Khushi, without giving them a chance to decide on their own...lets see...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

roops82 IF-Rockerz
roops82
roops82

Joined: 18 January 2011
Posts: 9652

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Harshi...u r back !!!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

aycma98 IF-Dazzler
aycma98
aycma98

Joined: 04 February 2012
Posts: 3567

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:30am | IP Logged
r

edited---


Sorry, had to go back and refresh my mind... 

I am loving this fierce Payal, that Payal who was very shy and timid around people, is now a tigress. She is willing to go any length to save Khushi form another heartbreak- Arnav.

I see Aakash grew a spine as well, or maybe its just because he does not want to miss out from Payal's life anymore. Either way, I am in awe with this fierce couple! I see a new side to them!

Oh Arnav, quite a shock isn't it? That too seeing Khushi at his office, asking for a job! And to know that she lost her memory, it must've crumbled him to pieces. I wonder if Khushi will be working for him once again, I mean will Payal let him? I was hoping that Payal would get a job as well, after what happened when Khushi first started working at AR. If she wants Khushi to stay away from AR, Payal needs to start working too. 

And Anjali is a new story... after all that Shyam had done, and all the pain he gave, she is still pinning over him?? She got second shot at life, I hope she accepts it and moves on! 


Edited by aycma98 - 25 February 2013 at 12:54am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

MysticRiver IF-Addictz
MysticRiver
MysticRiver

Joined: 16 October 2004
Posts: 77914

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:30am | IP Logged
loved the update..interesting..Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

-Xpress- IF-Stunnerz
-Xpress-
-Xpress-

Joined: 03 June 2010
Posts: 25617

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
wow..wow this is interesting... so now arnav knows about kushi's amnesia... hmm lets see what he is gonna do now...

looking forward to the next part

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

Dynamix215 IF-Dazzler
Dynamix215
Dynamix215

Joined: 07 August 2012
Posts: 2678

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Yayyy! FINALLY an update!!! I thought u gave up on this! I am glad to hear u havent discontinued!!! and Payal ka new avatar is just WOW! bechara Akash :( I think I get y PaYash had a fallout :/ he did nothing when SOMETHING (probably arnav accusing Khushi) happened... well, intezaar ka phal meetha Hota hai :) hope u update soon and reveal wat the mighty ASR did this time (m guessing past ka fiasco ) Sooo... keep updating :)

Edited by Dynamix215 - 25 February 2013 at 1:19am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

libbyferns Groupbie
libbyferns
libbyferns

Joined: 21 January 2013
Posts: 163

Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
luv this ff.  Please continue soon...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-_-harsh42

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 52176

Hina69 94 52176 13 October 2016 at 2:18am by arnavmaan
Arhi os:HILARIOUS CONVO BETWEEN ARHI.

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 60278

Hina69 94 60278 24 September 2016 at 5:29am by NPKN
ArHi OS : Night Time Is My Time! *REPOSTED* NOTE PG17

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 24 25

Author: -FriedriceJi-   Replies: 192   Views: 28845

-FriedriceJi- 192 28845 05 July 2015 at 9:51pm by xBabyAngelx
Shahid-Amrita FF: Acceptance (Chapter 15 (Last Chapter), pg 35)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 39 40

Author: Athene   Replies: 316   Views: 23926

Athene 316 23926 26 February 2014 at 12:08pm by Athene
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 212   Views: 148496

jasminerahul 212 148496 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index