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FF: Tales of the Heart|VirMan|CH 1 - 23 (Thread 1) (Page 124)

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
beautiful update loving it

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Thanks you guys! 
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
awww that was lovelyEmbarrassedTongue! luv how virat acted once he found out manvi was leaving so adorable. cnt wait for the next update i sense more virman scenes are approaching. Wish u all the best for ur uni selection. Dont worry u will hear from them very soon i didnt hear until jan anyway. tnk u for the pm!

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
sooo cute virat yr he is so incocent
i lyk d way manvi handle
plz update soon...

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Heey ! 
Faaab. update as always ! Love the way you roll with your words and penned out virat & maanvi's worrisome thoughts.. just so perfectly. Loved it all, the consciousness, the over- thinking, the hidden acceptance that eventually came out due to nervousness, the family bonding .. 't's all no nice to see. 
can't wait for the plan to bring them closer.. and hopefully as according to such a sweet ending, virat opens up more.. loved the last part of him blurting out everything in nervousness .. oh, how deeply the Prince cares of his Princess going away (that too because of him) .. he certainly won't take that. 
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Awh, I know how you the whole acceptance- wait is making you feel..I've been through that too. I'm sure you'll get in .. that in no time.. you'll be telling us the good news. the time wait is deff. a killer.. but everything will be alright in the end.. and trust me, the wait does pay off along with many desperate prayers <3 


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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Loved the update Zahara...VirMan thinking about their first kiss.. :) Glad Virat felt the guilt and this paved the way for him to tell about Maya at the end..I loved that!..I was always wondering how he's gonna tell her about Maya..Now this is the perfect way!Am loving it!Big smile
 
"He didn't expect to feel anything. It was just something that he felt he had to do.

But he was wrong. He did feel something."

Loved this portion<3.And Maanvi with Vadhera parivaar part was really good.The story felt complete when you add these small but important parts.I love Jeevika's and Vanshika's bonding in the story...A bit different from the show..Here they are having fun and teasing eachother..Aww..That was so refreshing..And am loving this Naughty Viren...So Viren and Shiv is gonna meet in next part!?They'll one of the best matchmaker partners!Big smileI'm feeling sorry for VirMan..Their first kiss is being discussed by the VirManains and now Viren and Jeevika knows about it!LOLThe last part was just awesome!Virat being tensed about Maanvi leaving..I loved his restlessness!

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"Maanvi is leaving." She spoke. As soon as the words left her mouth, Virat's heart sank. He felt confused learning the truth. "Maanvi is leaving? But why?" He thought to himself. "Was this that upset with me that she's leaving me? No, no. It can't be."

Viren looked at his brother who had a distressed look on his face. "Virat?" Virat looked at him. "Is everything alright? You seem tensed."

Virat jumped up from the bed and walked to Jeevika. "Bhabhi? You said Maanvi is leaving. Why? I mean, did she say anything? I swear bhabhi I didn't mean to hurt her, it just happened that -"

"What?" Jeevika interrupted Virat as he rambled on. He was completely nervous. His heart again began to sink as he thought of Maanvi leaving him.

"Maanvi!" He told Jeevika. "Is she actually leaving because of me?"

She smiled. "Of course, Virat. Why else would she leave?" 

"Oh god." He looked left and right whilst Viren and Jeevika looked at him concerned. "This is all my fault. Bhabhi let her that she doesn't need to leave. I seriously didn't mean to kiss her, it was just something that happened."

"What? Kiss?" Jeevika said out loud. Viren looked at his brother shocked. He hadn't expected him to do that! 

"Virat? You kissed Maanvi?" Viren asked, trying to hide his smirk.

"I thought you knew? That's why Maanvi is leaving me!"


Loved this portion!Big smileIt was such a treat to see...ermm...read Virat's restlessness!

And can't wait for the next part!Shiv is coming back!Big smileAnd can't wait to know what's in store for us during pag-phera rasam and how Virat is gonna get a good impression in the eyes of Chaudary family!

Once again,loved the update Zahara!



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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
thks 4 de pm buddy...it was lovely...mind blowing...plzzz continue fast

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Eeek!!!! Zahara. (scold me, because I haven't commented for the past two chapters). You are such a bloody beautiful writer. First the kiss and then Virat not wanting Maanvi to leave. Oh god.. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.

-Disha

P.S Are you going to bring Maya into the story to meet VirMan post marriage?
And I really do hope you get a uni offer soon.SmileSmile *fingers crossed* and thanks for the PM

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