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ZAHARA. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 August 2010
Posts: 10064

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Thanks for the lovely comments! Will update as soon as I get home from college (like I said, I love waking up to read them! ;))

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-Aswathy- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 January 2012
Posts: 7145

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 12:35am | IP Logged
U know what,after reading the ninteenth part,I could only think of 2 things ''strawberries'' ''She had an yearn to comfort him''...That's why I reserved the comment!LOLI love the way you have writtten VirMan's thoughts about eachother's presence..And JeeMan's bonding is so heart-warming...And I love the way you are unfolding Virat's past in that proper pace..I seriously love it!HeartAnd you are describing the Vadhera palace so beautifully and clearly that I could imagine it myself..And that last part!Maanvi saw a teary-eyed Virat was yearning to comfort him!OMG!Thank you so much for giving us such lovely VirMan momentsHeart
PS:I love that strawberry part!How much poor Virat is affected by her!LOL
Virat's past is more explored in the last chapter..Big smile...I love this pace girl..Keeping that suspense still in hand when Maanvi gonna know all about it..Can't wait for that..Really interested to know how he's gonna tell it and how the whole part will be like..
And loved Maanvi gave him his space to let him cry and get over with it..And I love their closeness..*blush*And OMG the second half was a treat to read..Virat taking care of her..Their understanding..Their convo..Their thoughts about eachother...Day DreamingAnd I love Maanvi's disappointment where she thought Virat didn't let her know about his past..
PS:I specially love the parts where you mentioned Shiv...Maanvi is still missing him..You keep it all so natural<3
Uh-oh...And that rose part has some significance??Like it symbolizes Maanvi will get hurt because of Virat or something??..May be I should just stop before you think I'm gone insane reading your updates!Tongue
PS:And don't worry Zahara..You have given us so much awesome VirMan as well as other moments to cherish until your next update..And thank you for that...Loved the spamming..Still waiting for your lovely VirMalacious updates!Tongue

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arhifandebi Senior Member

Joined: 29 January 2012
Posts: 630

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ZAHARA.

Originally posted by arhifandebi

Originally posted by ZAHARA.

Originally posted by arhifandebi

WONDERFUL PART...!!!!!! ClapLoooved IT...Heart... I had been waiting for it since a long time...Day Dreaming... You put up the blooming relation so beautifully...The way Virat was suffering reminiscing about his past was really touching... I just hope he confides in Manvi soon... The last two lines set me longing terribly for the next part...(This has become a habit with me though...Tongue..) Do continue as soon as you can dear...Star

HEY D. Did you like it? LOL

shame, I'll have to carry on updating from next week, sniff sniff. I'll see what I can do Cry

Of course I liked it dear...Star... and please don't regret it... You are indirectly doing good to me as My exams are going to start from tomorrow... So indirectly you are forcing me to concentrate ... (being selfish...ain't i?? Tongue)... Nevertheless I can't explain how badly I'll miss your updates...Unhappy

awhh! GET WORKING. Good luck with your exams...
mine start in 2 months, sighhh

Thanks a lot dear..Star... After 2 months I again have an exam and after that a series of exams will follow...Ouch... Exam-filled life..Tongue..where your updates act as my best source of relief...Star... All the best to you as well for your exams...Smile

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Zairean IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 June 2012
Posts: 3660

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged

I like the way you go slow with the whole thing without rushing. You write so fast, that I'm not able to manage with the pace you update! You're certainly on a roll girl..

I find friendship blossom between the two. Okayy so, Maya betrayed him and so he was on the verge to commit suicide but then Viren came by and saved him I guess..though I felt a little surprised at the sudden mood swing of Virat. 

You showed it how wonderfully Manvi had made a difference to her unknowingly. You gonna update today! Man are you planning to kill me with the updates! 

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Krazzy4u786 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 December 2011
Posts: 2565

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Wow!!!!! Superb update!!!
Loved it, can't wait 4 ur next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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love_zain Senior Member

Joined: 19 July 2012
Posts: 922

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
awesome updates totally loved it!!!!

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Aenna IF-Dazzler

Joined: 13 July 2012
Posts: 2666

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Oh finally dey liked each other
and i like d way virat was showing her d palace
and how dey were enjoying each others company
update soon...

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rush007 Senior Member

Joined: 26 September 2012
Posts: 610

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
superb story, enjoyed seeing this virat. I hope they both become friends and take step further by really liking each other in the romantic way.Plz do update next chapter soon.

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