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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
wat is wid virman not getting a typical sr anywhere whether its the serial or this ff...khair i loved the update...loved how both maanvi and virat were uncomfortable sleeping in the same bed...waiting for the next part...lets see how maanvi adjusts herself to the life of a royal... 

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
^

They weren't in the same bed? Virat was sleeping in the sofa? And about SR, then they're not in love? ConfusedLOL

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
wow.! awesome update. when ll you update next?

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
The ending was so sweet loved how jeevika was making
Manvi comfortable awesome update loved it continue soon
And do pm me

Edit

Sorry forgot to say congratulations you completed 100 pages

Edited by madpaki - 17 November 2012 at 10:34am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Hi Zahara,

Not only you write well, but your story concept is also unique...be it your cindrella story or the tales of heart...

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nisha33 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
was that 3-4 back to back updates?? WOW. i have no idea how you did it! now thats legit.
you know what i love about this ff, you are not racing to finish it. you are taking your own time to develop each relationship and that is why i love it so much. 
ofcourse i'm dying for you to finally get them both to love each other but it would be very unreal if they fell for each other right away. i love your pace so please continue what you are doing. 
today's update, gosh, loved the little things: he has started smiling more often now, one word "manvi" is enough to get his attention, the rude prince is a gentleman in front of manvi and so much more. these little things were the soul of the chapter if not the ff itself. 
i don't know how you do it but dang it girl you are good!
thank you so much for the pm!!!
even though i'm dying to read the next chapter, i'm not going to say continue soon because that would be unfair to you after all the updates you gave last week and today.
nisha

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha33

was that 3-4 back to back updates?? WOW. i have no idea how you did it! now thats legit.
you know what i love about this ff, you are not racing to finish it. you are taking your own time to develop each relationship and that is why i love it so much. 
ofcourse i'm dying for you to finally get them both to love each other but it would be very unreal if they fell for each other right away. i love your pace so please continue what you are doing. 
today's update, gosh, loved the little things: he has started smiling more often now, one word "manvi" is enough to get his attention, the rude prince is a gentleman in front of manvi and so much more. these little things were the soul of the chapter if not the ff itself. 
i don't know how you do it but dang it girl you are good!
thank you so much for the pm!!!
even though i'm dying to read the next chapter, i'm not going to say continue soon because that would be unfair to you after all the updates you gave last week and today.
nisha

AHHH NISHA! Heart
I've been doing updates every day for the past 3 chapters LOL

Thank you! Yes, I think it's not good to rush this one because its going to have an impact. Also, what I have planned in the rest of the story, the pace needs to be gradual for it to sink in. You'll see. Yes, he's a gentleman...well getting there! He's not perfect but once Maanvi comes then it'll get there :P

Love your comments! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
amazing ma8... loved the characterization and the discription of each person's feelings... love ur style of writing... amazing keep it up... hmmm slowly slowly virat is having feeling ey... brilliant ff dear keep it up

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