Murder In Chandni Chowk SS - Part 2 on Page 5 (Page 4)

rechus IF-Addictz

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
interesting..pls update soon

poojdc87 Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Hi!! Just read both of your chapters!! Your story is so good!! It feels like a real episode - I can't wait to see more Arjun-Riya...maybe in the next chapter...which will come out soon??? LOL
arul01 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Nice! Felt like laughing when riya was thinking abt her hygiene habits and how is she going to survive there!! Please update soon!
JennyPenny IF-Addictz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
That was really good. At one point, I felt like I was reading an episode update or something. Superb work. Def continue and PM  me whenever you do!
Mimi2609 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
that was brilliant,please continueSmile
mayur-ani Groupbie

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
... And the plot thickens . Don't mind but I think I'm in love with Mr and Mrs. Chadda! You've kept your characters intact and that's really appreciable. But since I'm greedy. I would really really like to read the romance part of it. You know?

You write thrill like a pro. So a great job there! I can't wait to get to know this murder mystery. Looking forward to your updates. And thanks for the PM!
-Raichu- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged
I've read the first lines, but I want to tell you that it's awesome !!!
Your characters are true to the show !!!

You have well make the characters out !! 

I have just read the first lines, your FF remind me another book !!
Don't worry I don't accuse you of plagiary Because I know what plagiary is !! WinkWink

I just want to tell you, please continue !!!
I absolutely want to know how it's going to be !! And Maybe I'm completely wrong !
And as a Big fan of detective story, I can't wait to read more !!

I'll read the rest soon, I've to go out right now Confused
and of course I'll comment Big smileBig smile


Edited by R66725 - 06 September 2012 at 12:46am
sizzysehrish IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 1:21am | IP Logged
nice one cont sooon 

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