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Fighting Fire with Fire # 2 link to T3 pg 146 (Page 70)

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
wooohoo! what an update!!! i'm sooo gladatman is going to be fine. he is quite an important character afterall isnt he? :)
 
as for arnav and khushi... well... nothng short of AMAZING. you write sooo well! i know i say this everytime but it is true :)
 
thanks for the PM x

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
nice update he thinks as Khushi not as his loveand ..he needs her..wants her...then what is it????...
loved arhi's moments...which is adorable

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
such a lenghty chapter loved it
firstly feel so sorry for atman im so glad he finally pulled thru he wanted to give into the darkness and just sleep, but eventually the doctors words got to him and he latched on and fought
arnav and khushis cute little banter before the call, loved arnav being khushis support during the hospital time when she needed him the most and his display of affection infront of anyone that was there, and her not moving shows the change in their relationship
the pictures in the room done by anjali and mami was adorable and it made arnav ponder the fact that if he loves her or not, but khushi knows she already loves him, im sure she loved him before their marriage right, maybe just never ever realised it
the changing the bandages scene was funny and its great how she cuddles up to him or kisses him without any hesitation, and lets him do the same
cant wait for the next partClap
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
read the whole ff in one go amazing loved it please pm me the next time u update

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
update soon... just love ur FF...

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 2:35am | IP Logged
awesome chapter!!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Wow!! :) xxx Poor Atman!! :( xx sorry I didn't reply earlier!! :( xxx Been really busy with 6th form and all that... Now another 37 odd PM's I nee to go through!! :) xxx
Please update soon!! :) xxx

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
I am three chapters late and this story has reached so far. Aahh.. Life is very busy these days. Forgive me for this extremely late comment.


 Arnav and Khushi are coming close and they have decided to work on their marriage.
My heart was in my throat reading about Atman. The suspense quotient in your ff is rising with every chapter and the romance too :D 


Their shower. Ah ha. I don't know where to begin. And its better if I dont. Already going red, thinking about it :D Their sexual tension is so beautifully described. Yes beautiful and not hot. Okay.. maybe hot to a certain degree but definitely beautiful. (do i make sense? :D ) And the supportive Arnav wins all my cookies :D And I love the tiny hilarious bits you add. Akash, such a poor and a naughty soul :D Shyam is thrice as evil as in the show. 


And the way you write mature scenes. I just love it. Btw just a suggestion. Why don't you consider moving it to a blog? The stricter rules of IF against mature scenes is troubling me. Lately, A lot of FFs have been removed for the mature content. And I really don't want that happening to this one. Your FF is close to my heart though I am just a new reader. And have you written anything else? Or do you have an index? I, surely, would love to read it. 


And your FF is totally recommendation worthy. Believe me.

Awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for the pm :)

Sweta


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