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Fighting Fire with Fire # 2 link to T3 pg 146 (Page 59)

lovelyangel Senior Member
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Atman made it through...this is excellent.The way you described Atman's relationship with Khushi and Arnav's understanding of this relationship,simply mindblowing.I didnt want Shyam to always have and upper hand and to always be successful in whatever he plans.Villans are deemed to fail..and thus they should fail and fall badly.
I personally loved the idea of pictures(and am now thinking of the possible couple of whom I can click different pictures and than later on gift them)

Target: Her neck.

Objective: Complete Surrender.

Mission Status: Ongoing...ROFLROFLROFL
I liked Arnav and Khushi's moment,the way you mix up romance and thrill in one part is great.So, Akash will from now on refrain from interrupting Arhi's moment(this is good both for Arhi and Akash)



Edited by lovelyangel - 21 September 2012 at 10:13pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
amazing update!!!!
OMG i love the naughty moments that arnav and kushi share!!!!
they are sooo lovely:P
 
oh and i love the way their bedroom is decorated with pics from the childhood to now!!1
 
loved thw update!!! thanxx for the pm:P
looking forward to the nrxt update

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nazibah IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Atman and Khushi share an amazing bond...and I feel very bad for him...and as always the ArHi scenes were awesome!! Thanks for the PM!!!

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allianz Newbie
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
loved the mission part tooo goodROFLROFLROFL
 
and the bonding of brother and sister loved it ...


Edited by allianz - 21 September 2012 at 11:09pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
first of all i like to thank you for giving such a long and superb update =) =) 

that's really wonderful =) =) i really don't how you do that but after reading your update i'm satisfied =)=) well i'm not saying that i'm not wanting more or not have the curiosity of the next chapter =) =) believe me i'm always waiting for the next part =) =) but what i saw a very rare uniqueness in your updates =D =). That's long and superb. 

love it =) =) okay i know you must be wonder okay who the hell is this and why is she commenting now only =) after good 21 chapters =D well dear don't worry you didn't PM me regarding the updates =) so don't look at this like that =) =) 

k back to the update =) or rather updates =) {because i think this is the first time i'm commenting } 

love your writing style =) =) you have described their feelings very very awesomely each and everything is in detail and i love that =) =) 
And also you have maintained the story right in place without go into too much detail or pondering in the same scene for paragraph and you always capture each and every one  in your updates and that's the most fabulous thing in your updates =) =) 

I mean you haven't stick only for the ARHI or Shayam but you have written other characters as well =) =) I know the story is like that but still you have done that beautifully and wrapped almost all characters into the chapter in every possible way you can =) =) And that's AWESOMEEE =) =) =) 

And agent Atman's scene was really nice =) you have pen it beautifully =) =) fantastic and yeah ARHI scenes were damn cute and lovely =) =)

Well hat's off to you brilliant and perfect update and after reading your update i feel like ... umm... totally full =D =D

Keep up the good work dear 

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome looong update. Can't wait for more...

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:22pm | IP Logged

I LOVED IT!! I'll come back later.

-V

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
this was awesomeClap

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