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Fighting Fire with Fire # 2 link to T3 pg 146 (Page 128)

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Beyond words!'
Totally worth waiting for 2 weeks.
Do not remember of anything else had been so gratifying as your update:)

Thanks first off all for taking time out and continue writing.

Now part1
Shyam is a creepiest character and

U r right to show that he would hv tried again
Again
And
Again
Anything to get entry in RM

Kuddos to anjali for staying strong.
Thanks for moving the story between her and Atman and not leaving it to our imagination.

Part2
Loved the patience Arnav showed
In giving Khushi time to confess..

Haha...
He accused her to be a coward!

Really coward... From all the things.
Perfect hit.
She deserved it
Showing ego and doubting him.

Passion was unmatchable!!
Beautifully done
But this is the couple u want at least two episodes on their honeymoon.

Edited by aafan - 23 October 2012 at 10:44am

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
bloody hell that was awesome rocking wicked perfect loved it beautfully done to anjali realizing the truth to khushi kicking snake butt loved it to the most awaited sr ever and the most awaited i love you he did see kick snake but and he called her acoward loved poor akash been traumatize forever loved the update thanks for the pm



Edited by dumas - 22 October 2012 at 6:58pm

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Loved it!!!!

You did complete justice to the much awaited part!!!

Good to see Anjali and atman bonding!!! And hopefully shyam will not reappear in the picture...

Poor aakashLOL

And what can I say about Arhi...so DM blessed him with extra potencyLOL and we get to see a kid!!!!




Edited by arnavbarun - 22 October 2012 at 12:09pm

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
awesome parts...loved it

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
so shyam is finally out of the picture...
and ahmed id trying to get shyam out??i know that wont happen...
finally they  became one...the B part wasBlushing...
thay were so like arnv and kushi and not ASR and KSR...
aww anjali and atman uh?? iam lookinf forward to read arnav giving some tips to woo anjali...
you described their moments very cutely...
ur going to end it??Cry...
if you do you better start writing another ff on arhiSmile
they are going to get a child soon??am waiting to see how they both come to know about their child...
awsum and hot update
thanks for the pm...
continue soon


Edited by kamalapushpa - 21 October 2012 at 7:36pm

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Loved it
 
Awesome updates
 
Big smile

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Wowzers. 

Well let me just start off by saying, thank you for updating this story. I was dying for an update, but I also understood your dilema about time and life; therefore I restrained myself from pestering your for an update. ... But can I just say ... that was definitely worth the wait!!

Yay! Shyam's gone. Atman is in the picture. You paint a cute picture of Anjali and him but I fear that Anjali might be on the rebound and someone might get hurt before their real feelings are realised. It would be lovely to see a turn in the tables where Arnav is giving Atman some advice about wooing his sister ... But, on the other hand, I don't believe for a second that it's the last that we'll see of Shyam! 

I love how you made Khushi such a strong character ... so empowering! #GirlPower!

I absolutely love your Akash, in Part A, he was the perfect brother, not just someone who stood behind the scenes and let his brother do all the work ... he too cares about his sister and that was nice to see, since we don't see that a lot in the show. Part B, Pahahaha! Poor boy. Living up to ASR. Ha! Oh dear, poor Payal. I imagine that she's not getting any because Akash can't a) get it up or b) keep it going for that long like Arnav. He needs to work out and improve his core stamina ;)

Perhaps Arnav can give him a few pointers! 

AND WOW! That was HOT! OMG. You had be blushing. It was just perfect, it wasn't vulgar but just natural and kind of romantic, something that seemed real, like a real life situation between a husband and wife and I love their post-coital conversation as well. It was just ... Arnav and Khushi!

The two parts were definitely worth the wait and I can't wait for the next chapter ... I hope that this story will not be wrapping up anytime soon because I am in love with it and would be sad to see it end!

Looking forward to the pregnancy plot as well! Trust Arnav to knock up Khushi on the first night that they were together! LOL


Edited by -kitti- - 21 October 2012 at 2:55pm

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Edited both comments page 127 and 128

Great updates :D

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