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Pm me Yaar
U r awesome!!!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdi22

gr8...sorry for cmmnting late...;.u r fabulous...go on quick

thanx..glad u liked it.

will update in some time..apparently m not well Cry..so it might be a small update..or a bit delayed one Smile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
ok people..thanx for the likes and comments..

m back with PART 3...hope u like it !! sorry..was busy with college and also suffering from severe back pain...but i have tried to make the storyline a bit more interesting..

PART 3

"kahin aisa toh nahi..ki annie ya naro mein se kissi ne hum dono ko milwaane ke liye yuvraj ko aise hi bol diya ho ki main yuvraj se milna chahti hun.. "

suvi called annie and naro in a conference call

suvi : hi

annie and naro :  hi!!

suvi: accha ek baat puchni thi...tumne yuvi se mere baare mein kuch bhi baat kari kya aaj ???

nahi..infact aaj toh hum dono hi tum mein se kissi se bhi nahi mile...evening mein yuvraj dikha tha...par voh bohot gusse mein tha pata nahi kyun..

suvi (worried about yuvi..) : theek hain..thanks..kal college mein milte hain! c ya!!

suvi : pata nahi yuvi mere se gussa kyun hain..main puch kar dekhti hun...shayad bata de..pata nahi galti se mere se kuch mistake ho gyi ho..toh main usko sorry bol dungi..

she decides to call yuvi..Here yuvi is still cross with suvi...

yuvraj: usne mere saath aisa kyun kiya ?? voh gyanesh itna pasand hain..toh main kisliye hun uske liye..mujh mein kya problem hain!..main bhi toh usse itna..pyaa ...

suddenly suvi's call comes in...but he disconnects it...due to the anger inside him..UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy

here suvi is sad...UnhappyUnhappy

mera phone bhi disconnect kar diya...ab kya karun..message kar deti hun...Approve
 
yuvi...m really really sorry par mujhe sahi mein nahi pata ki tum mujhse gussa kyun ho...maine toh tumse baat bhi nahi kari poore din...toh main kaise koi promise break kar sakti hun..please mere se baat karlo..plzzz...batao toh sahi problem kya hain..Smile

and she sent the message...yuvi saw the message coming from suvi..but as soon he saw the message notification from her..he didn't even mind to see the message..and ignored it...OuchConfused

here suvi was going thru the message inbox when she suddenly saw yuvi 's "okay" message...ShockedShocked

ye kya hain???Shocked
she checked the date and time of the message...

ye toh aaj ka hi message hain...voh bhi tab ka jab main kaam kar rahi thi...toh yuvi ne message kyun bheja mujhe??? Ye kis baat ka okay bheja yuvi ne mujhe??...kahin birender ne toh!!..ShockedShocked

she checked her sentbox..but found no message...she concluded tht he might have deleted it from sentbox but forgot to delete the message response from yuvi..TongueTongue

iska matlab uss birender ne mere phone se yuvi ko shayad message kiya hoga...and tabhi yuvi shaya mere se gussa hain!!..ab dekhti hun voh kya karta hain!!!...Approve
yuvi ke saath uneccessarily misunderstanding create ho gayi...and ye iss ke vajah se...and got sad on thinking abt yuvi..how much he wud have been hurt...Cry

she immediately locked the messaging thing in her phone with a password = "yuvraj i love you"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

next day..gyanesh again took suvi away for the campaign stuff...Angry

birender again tried to create some problems as told by gyanesh beforehand with suvi's phone by messaging yuvi...but cudn't open the message box password TongueTongueWink...and the time suvi worked..he kept on trying to open the message box LOL

meanwhile yuvi's anger came down...he was still a bit angry with suvi..but still went to the campaign's place to see her..Smile

here suvi was painting some charts for the awareness campaign...when yuvi was watching her..with a smile on his face...his heart melted as he watched her beautiful face..as if he forgot that he was so angry with her few moments ago...EmbarrassedBlushing

yuvi (thinking) : ye sach mein kitni pyaari lagti hain...mann karta hain isko hamesha dekhta rahun..pata nahi isko main kabhi bhi apne dil ki baat bhi bata paunga ya nahi..HeartHeartHeart

when suddenly gyanesh sees yuvi staring suvi from outside..Shocked

gyanesh intentionally goes towards suvi and puts one hand on her shoulder..and then touches her hand to take the paint brushAngryCensoredAngry

"agar ye aise paint karoge toh shayad aur accha lagega..."

this was more than enough to ignite the anger again in yuvi..Broken HeartAngry

yuvi : ye topper isko kuch bol kyun nahi rahi..ye kuch bhi karta rahega iske saath..aur ye kaam ke naam par usko kuch nahi bolegi...lagta hain topper mere ko waise bhi pasand nahi krti..aur main hun ki topper se itna...forget it!!...and immediately leaves from there...OuchOuch

here suvi feels uneasiness with him and immediately removes his hand from her shoulder and leaves from there...

here gyanesh is happyEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile...that he ignited the fire even more between yuvreen...and thinks that he has almost won the elections now..which was to be held the next day...Evil SmileEvil Smile

here suvi thinks of trying to convey her message to yuvi about gyanesh 's intentions...

meri baat toh yuvi sunn hi nahi raha..par annie,naro ya rathi ki baat toh sun hi sakta hain...SmileSmile

she finds all three of them..and tells them the whole story and how gyanesh is trying to create a rift between her and yuvraj...Thumbs Up
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that's it for part 3 guys...please do like and comment...and like i always say...suggestions r most welcome Smile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Part!! Lovely.. Thanx for the PM..

Do containu!! And do PM me wen u update next ;)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Awesome yaar... I liked it :)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yuvreensivin1

By good Yaar one of ma far os now

thanx a lot..will be certainly inspired to write more.. Smile

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Nice!!! Good work! Keep it up!

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