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Yuvreen in Love
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Part 2 (Page 2)
Part 3 (Page 4)
Part 4 (Page 13)
Part 5 (Page 16)
Part 6 (Page 19)
Part 7 (Page 23)
Part 8 (Page 27)
Part 9 (Page 29)
Part 10 (Page 34)
Part 11 (Page 37)
Part 12 (Page 39)
Part 13 (Page 41)
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ok SG'ians..finally i have written a OS..
i have started with the somewhat the same story as ongoing in d program right now..just for the foundation purpose..
...please do comment on it..as i want to know how good or bad has this gone..please feel free to comment and tell me if its crap!!..so that i dont bore u in d future
This story starts when yuvreen have started building feelings for each other'specially suvi'and scene is after their date...
Suvi is lost in yuvraj's thoughts every now and then. In canteen, at home, and with the gang around, she keeps staring yuvi.
Yuvi on the other also feels something about suvi...and this feeling has been troubling him since the romeo-juliet play which he hasn't been able to understand himself. Rathi and mannu have trying to give him hints that he is in love. But he ignores it thinking what suvi's reaction will be when she comes to know about the truth.
Rathi: chalo bhai...exams aa rahe hain ab toh..ab toh kuch class attend kar hi lo..
Meanwhile'yuvi is lost in their wonderful moments yuvreen spent together'and he is sitting on his table with laptop on'and a football match going on in that...but he is totally lost into his ladylove.
yuvi suddenly stopped thinking...and turned to rathi..
yuvi: kya bol raha tha'sorry main theek se suna nahi...ye match ki volume maine kuch zyada hi kari hui hain'isliye kuch sunayi nahi diya'
rathi starts smiling'and automatically comes to know that yuvi was thinking about suvi..
rathi : bhai..thodi class attend kar lete hain..waise bhi exams aane wale hain..
yuvi: hmm..chal main abhi aata hun..
Here suvi, annie and naro are busy studying in d library.
Suvi suddenly sees a park photo in her environmental science book..and starts thinking about her date..
Annie and naro notice suvi lost in her dreams..
Annie: itna miss kar rahi hain yuvi ko toh'jaa use mil kar aaja..college mein hain toh uske sapnon mein khone ki bhi kya zarurat hain..
Suddenly suvi starts blushing...
Suvi: nahi aisa kuch nahi hain...main toh bas...exams ke bare mein soch rahi thi'
Annie and naro'start laughing and teasing her'
But suvi leaves from the library'
And she sees yuvi going to her class'she wants to talk to yuvi...just to thank him about the wonderful previous day they spent..
She starts running towards yuvi'calling him "yuvraj'yuvraj..."
But the floor there was a bit wet'and she slips'and closes her eyes as she was going to be hit by the wall in the front' when suddenly she was wrapped by strong arms'and no-one except the cheetah himself!...and when she opened her eyes..they both were lost in each other *Eyelock*
Suddenly every1 started watching them'so their eyelock broke...and yuvi made suvi stand properly with balance
Yuvi: tu dekhkar nahi chal sakti kya kabhi bhi !!...
Suvi: main toh tumse baat karne aa rahi thi...par pata nahi kaise slip ho gayi'
Yuvi: kya hua'kaunsi aisi baat karni thi..ki tune dekhkar chalna bhi theek nahi samjhaa'
Suvi: *started blushing*...voh main'
Yuvi: haan bol topper'
Suvi: tumko kal ke liye thanks bolna chahti thi'kal ka din mere liye sabse khoobsurat din mein se ek tha'
Yuvi then keeps his hand on her shoulder...
Yuvi: tu bhi naa topper..isme thanks ki kya baat hain'main toh hamesha tujhe khush dekhna chahta hun'tu khush rehti hain toh main bhi khush rehta hun..tu sad rehti hain'voh mere se dekha nahi jata'
And they get lost into each other again'
Then by the side corner of the walls'someone was peeking at yuvreen'
Gyanesh: toh ye baat hain'ye cheetah toh zyada hi suvreen ka khyaal rakh raha hain'inki prem kahaani ko full stop lagana padega isse pehle ki inn dono ke beech kuch ho'aur suvreen party change karke hamare elections mein kaam khatam karde'and he thinks of an evil plan'
Classes get over'and the superb six gang are busy talking to each other'
Then gyanesh comes to suvi'
Gyanesh: suvreen'tumko toh pata hi hain ki elections aane wale hain'toh hamari party ne socha hain ki hum prokect Akshar start karte hain jisme hum waste paper ko collect karenge'jisse uss paper ko recycle kara jaa sake'aur ye dusre kaam mein use ho sake...aur tum hamari party ji G.S. ho'isliye tumhara aana zaruri hain'
Suvi: theek hain'main aa jaungi'
At night'both yuvi and suvi are lost in their thoughts'thinking about each other'every hour seemed like a day for both of them without each other'
Yuvi: pata nahi ye kya ho raha hain mujhe aajkal'jab bhi use milta hun'usme kho jaata hun..pata nhai ye feeling kya hain'pata nahi ye topper aajkal mere dimag se nikalti hi nahi..
Suvi: kal ko main yuvraj ko apne dil ki baat bata kar rahungi'main dekhna chahti hun ki yuvraj bhi mere liye same hi feel karta hain ya nahi'ye pyaar ki feelings jo mere mein hain yuvraj ke liye...kya voh bhi mujhe utna pasand karta hai ya nahi..ye janne ka sirf yahi tareeka hain!!...kal main bol kar rahungi yuvraj'THAT I LOVE YOU!!
And then both slept smiling and thinking about each other'
please do comment..i really want to see the responses for my first try..
will make it a SS if u liked it
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