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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 96)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
awww.!!!
it ended bahaut jaldi..:(
newzz..
welcome back:):)
..
ok back to the chapter..
it started with the promise part..
he was confused..
why was he actually thinking?
we know..but why he doesnt know?
...turning around while he was changin round was like LOL lol
..
i mean she was waiting 2 open her eyes..and he changed and then he was busy playing game on his celll..
lol
the whole chase was funny..no FUN,,:DStar
then her tiny palm holding water..lolStar
..then with coffee mug and again running behind him..Star
lol
it was really cute..:)Star
the about to fall part was aww...tooo cute..Star
she trusts him now..Star
she knew he would not let her fall..Star
indeed..!!!Star
he would never let her fall..:).Star
..then as always a thanking session..:)Star
and then thinkin of workin on the project..dragging him..n entering his room yet again..:DStar
then playing the song..then recalling the song..the incidents..the whole discussion about the song..about the video..Star
how the guy comes to know about his feelings towards the girl..\Star
and later the girl ignoring him and later he realizes that he misses her..Star
and then girl falling for him 2 but not showin..why? coz she's a girl...lol.:DStar
well..hope to see this part soon so that they would realize about it..Star
Khushi explaining evrything about the guy taking the initiative..Star
i hope Arnav takes the initiative soon..Star
...
the last part..elephants jumping in my stomach nw..:DStar
do pm me wen u update more..TongueTongueTonguethnxxxSmileSmileSmileStar

Edited by reallyhappy - 04 October 2012 at 5:46am

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
nice..Smile

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged

very beautiful n very wl wrtn as allwys.Clap

 thnx 4 pm

 lv u

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Nice update !
Loved the tom and jerry chase...will be waiting
for the dance ..

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

You beautifully expressed their feelings and the best part was your writing style very convincing that we can visualize everything we read easily!!! Wholesomely TREMENDOUS!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Yay!! You're back!! Alright, no more sobbing! Tongue

Awesome update... things should start to warm up now.. Waiting for the next one!Smile

Psst... Can it be longer next time? Pilij?


Edited by maverickmartin - 04 October 2012 at 6:13am

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
wow amazing update... what will happen next?? you left us in cliffhanger..

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