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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 6)

shraddska IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 1:57pm | IP Logged


Just finished reading it all in a go and realised you have moved on to the next thread so thought of commenting here...

It was actually recommended by a friend Shona.Angel and I am forever grateful to her for suggesting it...

I have always loved reading fiction in general and especially something with a supernatural twist... So the first chapter where Khushi goes to meet a fortune teller with her 76 rupees had me completely hooked... And their phone convo when Arnav called up Dell... I was like there we go...

But your portrayal of ASR is completely different... It's like he has two personalities... one for the world and one exclusively for Khushi. Obviously he seems to have a painful past which has turned him into a loner at such a young age... But I just love how he simply can't help being nice and caring towards Khushi though they have met just a few times... The name that he gave her 'Gloomy' that's so cute. The cruise trip and the Chai and he falling sick everything was so sweet of him... He is someone with a heart of gold... Or else who worries so much for someone you met only a day ago... And after going through the pain of staying away from her for over a month and not even knowing what went wrong now it seems he can't resist her at all, the way he is curious to know if she loves someone else... The way his conscience eats him everytime he thinks that he lied to her about the Kiss was so adorable... (Do we ever get to read about it and what actually happened from ASR's POV?) Anyways he can risk even a public appearance for her... Wow... Loved how he didn't care when she ruined his shirt with Mehendi or even spat water over him. And awww he so worried about her when she is upset...

And Khushi is... I don't know... she talks, lives in her dreams, talks, thinks practically, talks, cries, talks, messes up things, talks, laughs, talks, drives ASR crazy with her antics, talks, talks and yes talks... I Completely Adore her... I loved the part where she actually developed a headache because she didn't talk for 10 whole minutes... I mean that was crazy... She truly believes that she'll meets her soul-mate and I can so understand she not wanting to share this secret with anyone including ASR... Because from her POV obviously everyone would think it is crazy to look for a name you don't even know exists... But she has spoken to him... and truly believes that she will meet him one day... Probably that is why she doesn't like to get too close to ASR but she cant resist can she? And can't even help feeling guilty when he talks to her friend... Now she gave him the name 'Tsunami' but she doesn't use it as frequently as he uses Gloomy, any reason for that?

In Part 29E ASR mentions about the last time he yelled at her... Now that could only be the call he made at Dell right? So he recognises that Khushi is the same girl? Of course she had introduced herself so he knows... So waiting for Khushi to know it too but that would turn the whole story upside down won't it? It will be like the biggest twist of this FF...

Gosh I think I have written too much and I doubt you'll read it all but still with so many chapters and their parts there's still so much that I never got to speak about... Maybe as I continue reading next parts I'll do it...

Loved the FF completely and Looking forward to next part...

Congrats for 4th thread...

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ananya123 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
what's your plan? lol

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karmachameleon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ananya123

what's your plan? lol
Planning on putting my daughter to sleep and then I might sleep as
Thanks for asking...

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ashred12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
congrats on new thread...

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..SunnYaara.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Hoping for update today...

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diyaARSHI Newbie

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
ClapCongratulations on the new thread.!!! I am such a big fan for your both FFs - Fatemate and all started with 300 Rs...ClapClapClap

Waiting for d next chap ..Wink

Please PM meEmbarrassed

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LittlePrincess8 Senior Member

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
waiting ...waiting..

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appy111 Senior Member

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amazing wrk u r truely a very gudd writer:):) and congrats fr anew thread

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