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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 54)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Hi.im a new reader to ur ff...and the ff is just mindblowing.i loved the way u have sketched the charecters of arnav oh i mean asr and khushi.before i 4get to mention u have a lot of patience to give such long updates.u know what,i regret thinking why i didnt start reading ur ff from long back though i knew about it.[credit-appy indy] overall i just love,love,love this ff..plz continue..

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Loved the update..

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
Am reading the whole story once again frm start n falling in love with ur writting all over again I knw we had a superb update frm u this week for IASW300 but I can't help it but to ask u to please please please please pretty pretty please update soon...

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
it took me 2 whole days to read through your FF!

You are great! Your FF is great. You write awesome girl Smile
Lets talk about your FF now..

Khushi is non-stop chatter box, questions a lot, eats a lot and well cries a lot too WinkWink
but still she has done wonders for ASR. loved the pace of FF..no dragging no extra characters..its like the tshirt khushi gifted to ASR..perfect..Smile

i like their pet name too!! i mean everything is so right
childhood prediction, cruise, spa, ASR's concern, her job at ASR's fashion house, Mrs zubin, Bollywood references, the family functions, K's missing her parents, ASR's nani and the whole empire...everything..Smile

the length of your parts is so commendable..thats awesome, love reading your updates Smile

Update soon!
Thanks,

mehendi

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
I found your ff 2 days back and I was reading it ever since. Just completed all the chapters and it was just an amazing journey.

Your characters sketch, story narration and details are g8. You are excellent.ClapClapClap

I can imagine each scene as i keep reading. And damn I wish I can actually see it.
What I love the most about the story is that "IT REVOLVES AROUND JUST THOSE TWO". No extra 'BAGGAGE' Hug. GOD I WISH THERE IS THIS TYPE OF SHOW with just two pure souls, their pure love and their journey to feel, realize and accept it.

I love ASR and KUSHI .They are coping with there personal turmoil in their own different way, have very different life styles, priorities ... and yet they enjoy each other. Love how ASR takes care of her like she is a the most precious thing for him. And the beauty is he does it even without knowing the reason himself as if his soul just reacts to her.

I hope Kushi realizes his importance in her life soon and do something just for him. I mean he is the cutest of all men "Mr.P.E.R.F.E.C.T". Also hope the 'Promise' doesn't create any rift between them like before.

The best part for me was he is attached to her since Day 1 and her too. It was love at first sight. It was like there souls connected the instance they met and everything changed.

Desperately waiting for the next chapters. HugHugHugHugHug TO YOUEmbarrassed.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
i jst cnt believe this!!!i'm feeling damn stupid,so dumb n so blind!!!
hw cud i miss this!!!!
i jst read it all n i'm lacking words to describe it...
its out of the world..its by far the best i've ever read!!!
u're jst awesome,amazing writer!!
n wat clicked is that i relate to bits of d story,d friendship side..i laughed so much while reading on their fights cz i cud picturise me n my frnd fighting like that..n to top it all, the boy n girl criteria for wedding was our recent topic of conversation!!
i'm sooo happy i found this n was able to read this...

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Spent half a day reading this awesome FF...
Waiting for you to update!!!XD

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