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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 49)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
Happy anniversary!!!!
Thank u for updating as u made my day as special as urs ..
Love this story sooo. Ute.. Love that the voice was nani..
Love their bond.. 
Love their convos

Love it all!!!

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG holy crap that was a huge update!

Congratulations on anniversary I realize Im like 4 days late! 

Wow where to begin finally a new day the whole mehindi thing lasted a lot of chapters and I loved all of it!
SO many revelations and feelings I love the fact that we are getting to see Arnavs point of view, and his thought process.
Love khushi for being so khush all the time , the conversations these characters have really brighten my day! Big smile

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preciousgirl125 Senior Member
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Wow..just finished reading the whole 30 parts in a single go...i am speechless...addicted...in love with gloomy and tsunami as much as arshi...this is a fantastically brilliant piece of work...how do u write it so beautifully..lemme guess..u talk a lot right?? Juz like gloomy...now i am becoming like gloomy..more talkative..no i mean more expressive..see now i am blabbering:)anyways i am in love with ur story and can't wait to read the next part...and yes y do u keep saying sorry for giving longer updates?its like a treat to read them..the longer they are the bigger the treat is...so keep them as long as possible..greedy me...love ur work..

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
oh GOD...Clap Clap Clap
u r a superb n awsum writer...after reading 10 parts and 10,000 words i hv to write sumthing abt it...m a SILENT READER of both ur FF's but aap ne majboor kar diya kuch likhne ke liye...

part a : hw beautiful u desicribed d feelings of ASR...realising whats his fav colour...scolding servent for touching his mehndi wali shirt...nt even in my wildest dream i thit dat voice would be his NANI...
part b: hw cool is their relation...awsum...n dark circles hahahahahahaha
partc: talking to her without having his coffeee awwwieee ...
part d: bucket of coffeee...lollzzz    101 ways of nt to waste food...
           "I just want my husband to love me more than anything else in this world. That's it!" she doesnt want ne thing other than love...n i think arnav hate LUV coz of his past...his slip of tongue...dat mr india is nt in office...n den covering it up...
part e: listening to sum gossip dat 2 abt urself is a tough task...but i wanna kw dat GOSSIP...
part f : a shirt as a gift...hmmm nyc...but what i like is dat dis shirt remind her of him...n she bought it...LUV i tell u make people mad...
part g: FAV. PART...mr perfect tag n wid a sad smiley...made me think dat hezzz PERFECT whenever hez wid his GLOOMY Unhappy...
part h:  he juss attend dat party for her we all know...but to teach her swimming...hainnn or is he making up story after she questioned him awain...
part i : she is saying no coz i think she is feeling uncomfortable in front of him...as in to swim in salwar suit...lol
part j : promise...may he will ask her nt to leave him after he tell her abt their KISS...

PHEWWW hw did u manage to write 10000 words...



Edited by rocking meenu - 11 September 2012 at 2:54am

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swatim318 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
WOOWWW.. loved every bit of part 30...

liked the way you portrayed the inner turmoil of Arnav...

so the mystery caller is his NANI.. i had a feeling its Anjali... gud twist...

cant wait to read next update...

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imaan Senior Member
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
congratualtions 100times for new thread...
Kc what should i say about fate mate it is something beyond words...just wanna say i just feel every moment of ur ff with arshi... It is something which made me aware of sooo many feelings in love eccept of physical relation...love un touch...marvalous absoulutly beautiful...thanks a lot thanks alot...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Hi ya just started reading your ff can you please pm me
 
Many Thanks Smile

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Hey

I just found ur FFand its FREAKING AWESOME!!!ClapStar
Read the whole thing in like two days!!
Its just sooo damn addictive!Wink

I LOVED it!!Heart
All your Updates are AMAZING!!Embarrassed

i luv this Arnav and Khushi! Really different
Really waiting for Arnav to open up to Khushi! i really want to read that phase!

"Little that they knew that this one offer would affect their lives in such a way, someday..." Love this line!!Day Dreaming

PS - Im really pissed that i didnt know abt ur FF before,
But also happy in a way that i found it now , cuz had soo many updates to read together!LOL
And "Happy Anniversay!"Big smile

Pl Update soon!
& could u pm me pl!Smile



Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 11 September 2012 at 10:13am

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