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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 43)

Devilish.Angel Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
just awesum

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cymateli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hakunamatata

Originally posted by cymateli

Divya whats with this craziness of urs abt idiotic Arnav?? Tongue

aiven :P :P :P

Khub maaza aa raha hai...

that entire update just cracked me up...

arnav ko aise picture karte hue poora update padha : 

Oh I love this picture of him.. He looks sooo cute.. well I guess have used this pic to spam soo many times.. He looks adorable.. Blushing 

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luckyarnav Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
That was lovely dear.

How much i love reading this story i cant describe it to you.

Fabulous writer that u r .

Thank u sooo much for this story.
But i have a feeling smthng bad is cmng up plz plz plz dont write painful things.
and belated wishes for ur anniversary. God bless u with all the happiness in the worldSmile

Thank you again and update soon 

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dimple288 Goldie

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
wish u a very happy anniversary dear.( sorry. belated)Hug.. may god bless u both..Heart
congratulations on the new thread...ClapClap
coming to the update, it was just amazing...  written soo beautifully that i can easily imagine and visualize everything that i read ... really u are a fabulous writer..Thumbs Up
i am glad that the other person with whom ASR was talking to is naani.. but not di.. (plz... no di in this story...) naani worrying about her dark circles and rushing to spa was soo cute and funny...LOLLOL..
loved each and every emotion of ASR and khushi..,, her gift to ASR Dreaming
i guess, ASR will make use of the promise when he wants to propose her..Wink
thank u sooo much for the long update.. actually, we got a gift on ur anniversary..Smile

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shraddska IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for the PM...Embarrassed

Whoa and hats off for that looonnnggg update...Big smile 

Awww he likes Gloomy noticing his room...
Is black really his fav color... OMG he doesnt know his fav color...
Loved how he had dinner just because she asked him to...
I was wondering what he does for sustenance... I mean Khushi ate all the time and he refused...
I wondered if he actually survived on something other than food... like maybe air...LOL
So now is he going to keep his dirty shirt as a Memoir of their beautiful evening...Embarrassed

Hmmm so he talks to his naani... isnt that cute... and she is super cool...
and how it annoys him that Gloomy doesnt want anyone to think that he is her BF...Wink
Oh ASR's so cute in the mornings... he is just not a morning person and doesnt realise what he's doing...LOL
And The coffee part... COuldnt stop laughing can completely imagine khushi towering over him and making him gulp down a bucket full of coffee...ROFL 
I'm sure he'll stop the ritual... its actually weird to get coffee when he's not even there...
How keen is he to know about her choice for a guy...
and why did he stop so abruptly when she asked about his choice... oh all this mystery is so mind boggling...

Oh why did he refuse to hear the gossip??? now even we dont get to know abt it... *Pouts* 
Hey didnt they have college??? why is she going to priya's place straight after work...?
Just loved that all his thoughts just revolve around her whether it is his fav  color or hearing her voice first thing in the morning...
Awww she just wants love... what else would a girl want if her husband loved her more than everything else in the world...Day Dreaming

Gosh she has to just say that she's coming and he's all worried that something has gone wrong...
She bought him a gift just because she wanted to... now how cool is that...
And it really was cool... Mr. PERFECT and Gloomy...

I love how the smallest of words spoken by one of them bothers the other and gets them searching for a deeper meaning...

He actually came to the mehendi to prove a point... to make her learn to swim...
though it makes me think why so much stress on the swimming part... is there a drowning adventure planned...?
How nice of him to not force him to do something she wasnt comfy with...

Now I smell something really strange here maybe I am thinking too much but...
Why is it so important for him that she learn to swim...
is there a secret you havent revealed???
Sometimes I feel that there was a scene where ASR too visited the fortune teller but it hasnt been telecast by you yet...Wink LOL
Whoa and that was a huge promise Khushi made... I thinl even ASR was blown off by it...
and your last sentence... freak its making me so excited to know how this promise is going to be executed that it will affect both their lives...

I'm already waiting for the next...Confused
Cont soon... loved it completely...

Hope you had a blast on your anniversary...


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smarty94 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
updated on page 30, sorry fr the late, life being a pain these daysConfused

Edited by smarty94 - 09 September 2012 at 2:12pm

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samarablog Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Time will tell how will this offer/ promise of Khushi will affect the lives of these two..just hope it will affect in a positive way..
Am simply loving the way these two are communicating.. hoping to find someone like Him :D
Thanks for the PM!

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ananya123 Goldie

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
After reading all these killer comments on chapter 30, I am gonna have to try really hard to not do something you consider illegal.
You know what I'm talkin about yo! LOL

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