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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 36)

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Superb update: i can say bucket full of emotins n hidden feelings that r tryng to cum out but d owners r avoiding it.

cuming back to his room he s only thinking about one n onlx 1 GLOOMY
his entire room reminde him of her...
the way he reacted to his spoiled or we can say designed shirt with gloomy's palm imprints was lyk unpredictable...
he does not want anythng associated with his gloomy to leave him... n that s d reason he shouted at that servant d poor fellow who unknowingly was making him detached frm his gloomy's presence... what a luv but he s yet to admit it... hope it happens soon

then come d talks with nani.. howmuch he tried to hide his feelings through words, his eyes said it all. i hope khushi to read these eyes soon
finally he had to avoid d chat otherwise his deep secret would hav been revealed
then again he started thinking why she clarified that he wasn't her boyfrnd n tht too again... m sure stmthing pricked in his heart... poor baby

then d morning talk was amazng... n i luvd d way he chocked hering her saying that i wljg make him drink all coffee in one shot that he had been wastng... i can vry wll undertand what he would be thnkng going through this situation actually
i admire her the way she told her criteria for a perfect hubby for her: d one who luvs me d most than anxthng n anyone else in the world n how he avoided to answer d same ques. what he would hv said?? just lyk u gloomy...
lolz.
when he said mr. india s not there he got trapped himself in his own game ( apne leg par khud kulhaari maar li) bcoz. khushi got a doubt n asked do u know the owner here?? I was lyk ab to bata do that u r the only hot shot boss of her

I wonder why he avoided to listen d gossip...it would hv been fun if not for him ther atleast for d readers...

then i luvd d scene where a higily patient may loosing all his patience n then cums d most exciting part of d update: the gift
the black shirt with MR. PERFECT written n a tiny emoticon a sad one was super- duper fataaak... n her words it's exclusively made for us made it more special...

n as she denied for swimming... she said u can ask me to do any 1 thing anytym n i wll do it without any gues..
i was scared when asr said what if i misuse it ... i might but may be her confidence u won't made me confident that he won't

i just hope this 1 offer affect their lyf in such a way that none of the two regret it later on... keeping my fingess crossed

thanx for such a long update... n a long comment just for u ... i hope u lyk it... its d frst tym m writting such a long comment

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged
superbbSmile,am in love with this story...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
nice update!!!!1
thnx 4 da pm

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Beautifully written update
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
a beautiful update..SmileSmile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:59am | IP Logged
loved it...great going...Clap

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
wondering wat he was gng to ask???
waiting 4 nxt update...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged
OMG! such a looong and such a great update! it was worth the wait! I loved each and every part of it! the way they themselves are confused about their feelings LOL
and I loved naani's character LOL
and the end is such a cliffhanger! I'm literally hyperventialting after reading it Wink
this promise is going to be a roller-coaster ride, waiting for it to know how it unfolds Wink

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