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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 27)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
like..?? that would be the understatement of the centuary.! i loved it, more than anything. all the shift of the emotions that took place there, including arnav's idiot avatar to his smiling non-stop form.! i was too grinning like anything while reading his beheka-beheka behaviour.! boy, you are so in love with her.! then their phone convo, man had to agree, she really can TALK.! and that much...i wasn't even knowing.! and how he also involved himself into her useless talk, was so adoring.! he really had fallen hard for her.! then the t-shirt sequence was indeed the P.E.R.F.E.C.T moment in this whole 30th chapter. i can't even explain you how i felt after reading that part. it was a mixture of wonder, affection, love and many more things.! and i was really able to understand arnav's situation after receiving that gift, as i was myself also going through that.! seriously man your writing do create MAGIC.! i soo love it. and now the only need of the hour is for khushi to understand her emotions too. it was one such remarkable update yet again delivered by you.! uff enough of my blabbering now.! do continue soon...

P.S. - wish you a very 'HAPPY ANNIVERSARY'..!!! Party
          do enjoy this fab day.! take care. :)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
nice update...

thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Hi KC, happy anniversary!
These two are so in love and they do not realize it because they have isolated themselves into a world of heir own. So the "Voice" is now Naani? I still think that it's Anjalie!
Can't wait for her to real use that ASR is her boss. He may have to call in the "promise" when she does find out!
I love this story because it shows their growth from friendship to falling in love. I look forward to the next update.
Cheers 
Maya

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
1st thing that i want to ask you to notice in my comment..:P
*full words*
now...
to begin with..
Shirt..well he should get it framed now..and put it in his room..or hang it..so that no more dust can effect it any further..LOL
that VOICE was Naaniji..?
Oh i love you so much..SmileHug
thank you..:)
the word BEAUTIFUL..well..he really meant it..
the moment Naaniji asked whether she's pretty..his immediate response was..BEAUTIFUL..which he truely feels..Wink
loved the Naani-ASR bonding..:)Tongue
 
next..
her first call in the morning..
making his day..:)
i thought he would agree over the gossip matter...that would have let us know..what his employees feel for him..and what do they gossip about,,:)
 
next..
the husband and Love criteria..oh am worried about his past..is there any?Confused hope not..
Khushi's part is clear..:)Smile
 
next..
taking his/her side..(by ASR)
i thought that would lead them to a fight..but no..:)Embarrassed
 
next..he said to someone on phone to arrange the meeting in  the afternoon..
now Gloomy is with him..he would miss his work for her?Confused
(i would love indeed..Big smile lolLOL)
 
next..
her entry again..LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
her gift..
seriously that was amazing..
i mean you thought to add it so brilliantly..
the colour..Mr.Perfect..Gloomy..all in one..'
that was the
StarStarStarStarBEST part of this chapterStarStarStarStar
 
next..
so many times the word perfect perfect perfect..
my day is gonna be perfect now..:)LOL
 
lastly the swimming part..
her honesty..
his coolness..
and the last promise..
waiting eagerly to see where you are gonna use that..*promise part-anything..anything*
 
do pm me wen u update more..TongueTongueTongueTonguethnxxxSmileSmileSmileSmile
 
(P.S..i want a reply to this effort of mine..though i always comment..but from now onwards..my Teenage typing z shut for this FF..)EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Lastly..
wishing you a very Happy Anniversary..:)Heart
enjoy loads..and God Bless you..:)Party


Edited by reallyhappy - 08 September 2012 at 2:35pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
ClapSUPERB, FANTASTIC & AWESOME UPDATE AS ALWAYS. GOOD WORK.Clap

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update just loved it Heart
can't wait till next update please update soon
happy anniversary Party

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY DEAR...<3
MAY YOU HAVE ALL THE HAPPINESS IN THE WORLD...Smile...ENJOY YOUR QUALITY TIME...Party...A BIG BIG THANKYOU FOR UPDATING YOUR MASTER PIECE FATE- MATE...Big smile

ASR is happy unlike other times feeling khushi's presence...and also praising her..be it her voice or her beauty..Heart...!!
ASR shouted on the poor servant for taking that dirty shirt for cleaning just bcuz khushi mehndi is imprinted on it...also kept his promise...im sure something is brewing up..other than just friendship...Smile
ASR chocked hearing that khushi will make mr.india drink all the coffees he had been wasting...LOLLOL
ohoo...ASR  too curious to know khsuhi's criteria for liking some guy...Wink
Khushi: What are you stupid? If I imagine a wedding, I would need a husband in that wedding, right?...
so true khushi...lolz ASR...=P
ASR feeling like idiot many times...a miracle...ROFL
there convo on phone...as usual superb...!!...<3
the great ASR restless and waiting impatiently just for a GIRL...love could make people do such things too...LOL
awww...she bought a black t-shirt for him..  MR P.E.R.F.E.C.T. and a sad face...just like them.Big smile..
hes eager to wear the gifted shirt...WOW...=D
he attended the mehndi function just to make khushi swim...hahaha...LOL..thats quite funny...no its cute or i think this really amaze me...Big smile
khushi is so confident that ASR wont misuse her promise...how adorable...she trusts him...SmileSmile
thankyou so much for the pm...take care...cont soon...loads of love...Hug




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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome m not the 1st one to read it thts sad otherwise what an update ... From part a to j i was myself smiling like idiotic throughout asr noticing the color of his room for the 1st time strange man n keeping the stained shirt sweet... Neverever in my wildest dream i thought tht women to b nani 1st i thought i might b anjali then lavanya but this never wao so mod nani lolz clever asr talking abt dark circles... Bucket full of coffee n throwing it on mr.hot lolz what a plan n tht too telling directly to the person in question... Oh the shirt was cute to imagine this priya is going to play some vilian role i dont know i have a gut feeling tht she is some kind of J from Khushi... Her dreamman cute just like evry other girls dream man... Oh asr didnt went to the mehndi just for making her swim he was there for HER to see her to b near her i feel it but y did he felt disappointed when she said no n that promise in the end n last line so something dreadning is gonna happen??? No plz this time do update soon

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