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Fate-Mate Thread FOUR Chapter 31 (Page 21)

ak_maggi Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
yay!!!!!!!!!!! 4th thread!!  congrats Kc...Smile
waiting for update...Big smile
wonderful VM appy...Clap

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arvankhushi Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
amazing!! loved it!! <3 <3 

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-Koeli_Appy- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
KC again it was a very nice update. You have potrayed their emotions so well.

i love the way arnav keeps on thinking about her. it shows how concern he his for her.

He notices her small small things and remembers it.

how seet of him to keep her promise by eating his food. but why at the first place she was so concered about his eating? kahin khushi bhi kareb to nahi arahi hai?

i wish the keeps that mehendi wala shirt with him forever and i want khushi to notice that later on and question him.

So possessive about that shirt? "is it asr?" you wanna keep it forever like that dont you?

i love the relaitionship between nani and him. its adorable. but i still think he is rude with his family memebrs. i wander when you are going to put light on that. why he is like this when his nani is so adorable.

again we saw a cute arnav in asr when he excitedly spoke to nani about khushi. hmm good to see some different shade in his character.

i loved the way how natural reaction you have brought when arnav woke up to recieve khushi's call. if i was in his place even i would have got equally excited to see my bf's name flashing. in his case his best friend's name.

lolz poor arnav, the way khushi told him that she will force her boss to drink the bucket full of coffee was hilerious. i can so imagin arnav's expression to that.

*PANIC ATTACK* (will pm you why)

"I just want my husband to love me more than anything else in this world. "
wow what a line. khushi asr is just doing the same. ya i know he doesnot show you much. but his intensity is way beyond your imagination. i can tell you closing my eyes that no one can love you more than this guy. he is so into you khushi. i hope one day you return back his love much more intencified.

awe khushi is now all grumpy thinking asr chose his friend (khushi's boss) over him. but dude he is the boss man. chill khushi. but good atleast arnav should know how she feels. i really like khushi's character. atleast she dosenot fake things around her. she tells/says what she feels.

awe she gifted him a shirt. now thats the most adorable part in this update. i am touched again. and how asr reacted to it was more touching. just loved the scenes between them. again a very cute characterization of khushi which proves she doesnot think twice before gifting him anything. loved it. 

MR. P.E.R.F.E.C.T  there he goes. lovely. khushi thinks that he is perfect when he is the most flawed man i guess. i know KC you havenot revealed anything about arnav yet (dude you have some patience) but lets see whether my statement is true of not.

"ASR: I am seriously telling you, it's quite alright. I don't need any such promise.

Khushi: I know you don't need any such promise but I have to…..

ASR: Anything?

Khushi: Yes, other than swimming.

ASR: Other than swimming, anything?

Khushi: Yes.

ASR: Any time?

Khushi: Yes.

ASR: You won't regret it?

Khushi: No, after all, a promise is a promise!

ASR: Are you sure? You might not realize it but it's a big thing what you are offering me here.

Khushi: I am sure.

ASR: Just because this shirt says Mr. Perfect doesn't mean that I am actually perfect. I could misuse it.

He warned her as clearly as he could…..

Khushi: It's little too late to worry about that. I have already promised.

She ignored all his warnings……


ASR: Okay! I accept your offer."

KC you scared me with this yaar. this was the very part that i couldnot have any guts to comment on. i am very scared. i think i can visualise what might be coming. KC...NO...please...I am dead now. i dont know why i am recollecting the devdas wala update now. Confused

Edited by Appy_Indy - 18 September 2012 at 6:35am

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sam88 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged

i m think still think to start

awesome n very long update
i m wondering when we will get dis long update for 300 Tongue
i alway thought dat its anjali on skye never had an idea dat it can be nani also
i m awaiting for see arshi facing eaching in office
then when khushi will make hime drink bucket full on coffeeWink
i hope arnav doest make wrong use of his promise
i know he wont but still keeping my fingerscross
see at 300's threadSmile

Edited by sam88 - 10 September 2012 at 9:20am

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Polkadots78 Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
This story should be renamed as soul mates...beautifully written and ever emotion at these 2 characters feel are felt by us?...

Oh and a very happy anniversary!!

Edited by Polkadots78 - 08 September 2012 at 12:22pm

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shagun05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
hey first of all congratulations on the big day... and  stay blessed always...
and i hope ur baby girl gets well soon.
and nw the BIG BIG UPDATE... super liked... no no LOVED IT!!!!!
and the way u are portraying nani, awsome!!!
eagerly waiting fr the next part...

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Congratulations on your anniversary and thread 4... Love this story so much..looks like he is finally going to ask her out or something that will move their love story ahead...he likes her and so does she now they need to say it out aloud and the act on it...they are so perfect for each other...wonder when she will realise who he is ! Love the chats he has with his nani! Cute...thanks for the pm.

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debby_11 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Happy anniversary...the part was superb...each and every sub part was so damn good...i just loved it...Thank u for the pm :)

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