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meradil

@meradil

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

that was an AMAZING update!!!!!!! Happy Anniversary!!! Thanks for updating for your fans :)

I really hope Arnav doesn't misuse... all of your questions at the end made it seem like he may, but i love the relationship they have.

I don't want this FF to end, but at the same time I want arnav to know about the 'fate' khushi has already dreamt about, the guy she's in love with without meeting, and most importantly his name...

but regardless of that, i know im gonna enjoy whatever it is that you will write :)

btw congrats on thread 4!!!!!

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Divya

@hakunamatata

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

I hope you had a ball with your hubby and princess..
so here is hoping that you always remain :

cheers :D :D

now about FATEMATE :
SSSOOORRRIIIEEE I still haven't been able to read your FF...damn time difference.. :P :P :P And I'm babysitting few kids since last evening...so getting no free time at all...

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813504

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karmachameleon

Fate-Mate 30 Part J

Surprised to hear that, how he was done talking about
everything. How he didn't mention it further……
She couldn't even answer anything. It was her who had said
'no' and he let her be…….
Then why was it bothering her now? She wasn't sure if he was
mad at her…..
She didn't even know what he was thinking. She couldn't
tell. 
He turned around to leave, but stopped, not by himself, but
by her hand clasping onto his….
He halted, he turned back around, he looked at her hand
holding his, then he looked up to see her…….
With a questioned look……..
She said……
Khushi: I know you came to the mehndi for me, because I am
the one who said it's the same thing and
I know it's a big deal for you to attend parties and stuff……….I don't know what
I was thinking when I said all that. I never ever thought that you will
actually take me that seriously. I am very surprised that you actually did
something like that………just so that I will learn to swim………I still don't know
why all this is so important……..but I do know that you did something so drastic
just for me………so in return I don't want to disappoint you……..I…….
ASR: I what? He quickly asked with a hope in his voice……
Khushi: I am still not going to swim but……
ASR: But what? His voice was back to being confused…….
Khushi: But I owe you one for my mistake. 
She pulled his hand up now, holding his hand in-between her
two slender hands, looked up to see him and said……
Khushi: You can ask me to do any one thing, ONE THING, any
time, and I promise I will do that one thing without any question. Other than
swimming of course! I promise.
And he felt her hands squeeze his while she confirmed her
promise.
He smiled hearing her say that and replied……
ASR: It's not that serious, I don't need any such 'promise',
it's all good.
Khushi: No it's not. It's my fault, I shouldn't have said
that. I owe you one. You will have to accept it.
ASR: Gloomy, I am serious, it's not that big of a deal. 
Khushi: Not for you but for me it is……..
ASR: Don't worry about it, it's NOT a big deal.
Khushi: It is a BIG deal. 
ASR: That's one heavy weight promise you are offering, you
know that right?
Khushi: I know.
ASR: What if I misuse it?
Khushi: I know you won't.
ASR: I might!
Khushi: No, you won't. 
ASR: I am seriously telling you, it's quite alright. I don't
need any such promise.
Khushi: I know you don't need any such promise but I have
to…..
ASR: Anything?
Khushi: Yes, other than swimming.
ASR: Other than swimming, anything?
Khushi: Yes.
ASR: Any time?
Khushi: Yes.
ASR: You won't regret it?
Khushi: No, after all, a promise is a promise!
ASR: Are you sure? You might not realize it but it's a big
thing what you are offering me here.
Khushi: I am sure.
ASR: Just because this shirt says Mr. Perfect doesn't mean
that I am actually perfect. I could misuse it.
He warned her as clearly as he could…..
Khushi: It's little too late to worry about that. I have
already promised.
She ignored all his warnings……

ASR: Okay! I accept your offer. 

It was her who had offered such generous promise, then why
was she more excited than him? 
He was the recipient of this wonderful offer but why was he
more worried than her?

They both stood there, by that same pool, where they had
discussed this hot topic of swimming for the first time.
It was still the same place where they put an end to this
topic, for good.

She was still holding his hand, concluding her offer.
He kept his hand there, accepting that offer.

He cupped her left side of her face, with his available hand
and said….

ASR: I am asking you for the last time. Anything?
Khushi: I am telling you for the last time. Anything.

Little that they knew that this one offer would affect their
lives in such a way, someday………

To Be Continued…….

Almost 10,000 words of writing. That's a LOT of writing.
PLUS – It's my anniversary today and look what I am doing,
updating Fate-Mate. 
So do me a favor – write SOMETHING.
Ya – Like it, write something. I want to read your comments.
Bring it on!
New Readers: Very
Easy – just hit the Buddy Button for future updates. 
I hope you guys liked the much awaited Chapter 30. Thank You for reading. 
-KC

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

wow big update so big THANKS😃

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539002

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

first of all happy anniversary.

superb update.

I loved it.

waiting for future update to know what will he ask.

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happy

@lovearshi01

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Superbbb
Awesomeee
Amazinggg
Great update
Loved it!!!!

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essess

@essess

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey First Off- HAAPY ANNIVERSARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Second -- hope ur daughter is OK now.

Third--- great chapter-- lovd the nani interaction, also the introspection by Arnav, and have great expectations of that last promise!

THX!

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divya

@diyadivya

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesum... js lovd it... n happy anniversary

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Happy anniversary to u!
How's is ur little angel now? Is she fine??
Reg the update.. Thanks for the maha maha update..
It's a really complicated emotional love story.:)
Awaiting already for the nxt... N yes waiting for that anything

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762941

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for the long update. Nicely written. Great to see Arnav getting more into the 'relationship'. Looking forward to some movement on Khushi's side.

👏

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