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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
beautiful !!!

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
That was...beautiful. 

I am actually speechless. 

Amazingly well written. So vivid, that I could imagine the colours, the dancing feet, her hair curling around her cheek, the doris, heck I could almost smell the food she prepared for Arnav!

This has to be one of the best OS's I have read in a long time. Hats off to you. Great work! :)

~K

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
aw i can feel the tears in my eyes.
it was so beautifully and amazingly written.!
i literally loved it the whole.! 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
beautiful OS !!!!! Clap

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Loved it!

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Sona!
 
You gave me three.. scratch that.. FOUR things in this chapter.
 
First... Dance.
 
Dance for me has always been my happy place. A place where the only way I can be judged is by my flexibility, and by my emotion. When I feel the adrenalin pound through my veins... the spotlight shining on me. Centre Stage. Hushed whispers in the back stage. The silent audience. The haunting melody, which comes whispering... then blaring. I can't explain it. It is like my personal rendition of wonderland. Where NOT moving on after a bad break up doesn't mean being weak. Where dreaming is not a sin. Where I speak, without opening my mouth. Where crying is not a crime. Where being deliriously happy is not an invitation to others to bring you down. Where I am... me.
 
 Je deviens la danse. La danse devient moi. Nous devenons un. (I become the dance. The dance becomes me. We become one) (LOL! I'm sorry... the french just came out)
 
Personally, I have never been attracted towards classical forms... i have always been more of a pirouette! arabesque! chainee 2 3 4... and then STOP! back straight, chin up, chest down, bum in, neck long, stomach long, and feet turned OUT. And smile. #looks sheepish
 
But... one of my aunts is an odissi dancer, and whenever I see her... I start crying...
 
Classical has never been my thing. Appalling I know. Sigh.
 
Second... your writing. I LOVE IT! But you already know that. Nevertheless... I'll say it again. Amazing writing! Really!
 
Third...Arnav and Khushi. But I'd be redundant to state why.
 
Fourth... my name. This is perhaps the lamest... but when I read she started off with the Vandana... I felt this thrill inside me. LOL! I know... you probably weren't thinking of me... but eh... I dream.
 
All in all... this was one beautiful OS... where in the end love triumphed over money... and more importantly... over ARNAV (mercenary ass. :P). Seriously... when I read stories of people losing out on love... I feel really sad. Maybe more people should take inspiration from this one... and see that is the love is true enough... it can be salvaged.
 
Thankyou for writing this. Thankyou for the PM!
 
-V
 
PS- I was planning to keep this one kind of short... buhh when I started typing... It just went on and ON! #facepalm
 
 


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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
simply awesome.loved it

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
nice updt

thanks for pm

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