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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 95)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Res
unres

first time not feeling happy for commenting first...dint wanted to hurt any1

anyways

awesomee update khushi

sweet and senti one...:)

ya its long enough...;)

so good to see atleast vishakha knows the truth...

She is really a true friend understanding her bestie's condition...

Hehe vish knows abt kriyansh...

I hope atleast rey gets to know abt the truth b4 she leaves...

Thats MOM...at times strict and then suddenly the sweetest...loved that daughter mother convo...

But The best part was...ur last line "this is temporary decision"
yaay...



pr - sorry asma

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 08 September 2012 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
  hope res can me made here
Kinjal  u!!!!!!!!!CryCryCry

unress

meri dusmane bhari padi hai thread mai..mujhe forst comment karne nahi dete hai koi..

Acha koi nhai ab nmai sar pitke kya karu...


Dont know y i loved the update..
It was emotional one..
Could reemeber few scenes of D3 but the cahnge to it must say apt..
Vish knows abt Kriyaansh and then the way she managed understanding her frnd and supporting hert admist distress.
Was int this fair enough for her  TRUE FRND!!
And the way Kria was getting hurt nt picking a call Phew it hurts a lot I must say...
And the Smrittis' woe to her..
She choosing her friends than herself and last but not lest the lovely concern,care of a mother..
No mom will be as horrid as Smritti was shown in D3...
moms stop their daudgters but nt to make their life hell as Smriti of D3 did..
Gosh mere D3 ke sare frustrations yaha nikal rahe hai...

Monday or tuesday..
R u serious..


Bonanza...
 Hua hai mera...





Edited by asmaju - 08 September 2012 at 12:36pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Well...

Clapping my hands together...

Dekh khushi mein Aa gai unres karne...

Bt only dis one fr nw...

Sry fr Dat...Embarrassed

Well...

Cumin 2 d update...

Cn u please cum in my view rite nw...

Please...

Dar mat...

Tennu ek V A D D I waali jhappi deni hein...Hug

U jus penned my thoughts today...

I sooo freaking wanted something of this kind to happen...

Atleast someones hould have known and tried to stop our poor kriya frm doin Dat stupid thing...

U no wat...

E1 though u kept smriti's condition...

I just loved her in ur update...

Wondering y...

Coz d way u portrayed d last lines of her wanting to see her daughters dance...

It just touched my heart...

I seriously can't wait for Monday now...

I really badly want to read the next part,..

Please jaldi update karna khushi...

*pout*


Edited by Born2Dance - 08 September 2012 at 2:56pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
chalo at least there is one person arnd who knows the truth...

that is a relief...

fir at least one person who isn't dumb...

again hush...

basically this isn't a CVs show... hush again

and most importantly...

do one more thing...

don't destroy mom's image as they did...

show some solid agenda types...

or a heart melting smriti...

overall loving it... i mean am just reading the new additions u r making... Embarrassed

baaki ka haven't watched then...

not reading it now...

so very sorry...

but thank u for making the senses in the stry... *eee*


Edited by kriyansh24 - 08 September 2012 at 12:31pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Sorry if i reserved it in mid

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 08 September 2012 at 12:29pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
asma... again didn't get it Ouch At least it's on the same page this time Big smile 

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
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Nice update khushi...I really liked it Smile

Thank god ki at least vishaka knows the truth Smile I loved how she being a true frnd supported kriya n respected her decision even when she thought that kriya shud tell everything to rey...bt I wud have liked it even more if she had given her some gyaan n made her do the others way round...bt wait wait wait, since this isn't a cvs show, so we most definitely know that kuch v ho jaye, future mein everything is gonna be fine so I can be fine with the fact that rey doesn't know anything yet Smile

Next update monday-tuesday?? Shocked arrey aisa kyun, deal toh daily update ki hui thi na toh fir aisa atyachaar kyun?? Cry

Edited by sreya19roy - 08 September 2012 at 1:12pm

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

hope res can me made here
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Kinjal u!!!!!!!!!CryCryCry

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wat?
She updated n i res'd it...
Sorry i u dint like...

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