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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 84)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Koi gal nahi...
The thing is i must read one before sleeping 2day...

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Pg 79 asma... 

Originally posted by namylovkriyansh

Vishaka in the scene
well this was not in the show
kash hota nayway i lovced the update
continue n update soon...

Yup!!
It wasn't. 
Hope so too but oh well.. idhar hai :D

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Just 5 pages nah Khushi..
We'll do it soon..

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

Khushi this is  not done..
When i was nt der u have updated and see the totla pages it has gone without my comment..
i'm feeling so bad..
Sari koso mere net ko... arr net!! I was waiting for you to come come come but you didn't. I was wondering where you were.. first time without your comment anywhere Unhappy
And now to the update..
This part was gr8.. --Glad to know!! 
I dnt know agar yeah hota tho D3 kahi top mai hota.. hehe true... guess they ain't really worried about TRP charts. 
Loved the way u protrayed the feel after dance. 
he dance was special to Kriyaansh.. it was... 
and so cherishing is isnt!!! absolutely! Can't forget it ever. 
And the Reyam talk I serioulsy miss the feel sometimes eventhough they manage.. they do have some of those but none of them are as blissful as before... 
Sharon lka call de ke Rey ko Earth calling ho gaya.
How fair is dat!!!  Ha ha And She is nervous.It happens to all before any big event occurs.. heheh true... bade bado ki chutti ho jati hai =P
Next comes the most avaited part.. it does.. 
Aaccha if i had gone by prev storyline I  would have assumed Kria wil cal Neha but with what I have seen pasat Kria's departureI would hug you here to add Vish.A true friend must say...
And then to all the gloroes who made her update Thanks a lot.. true... but seeing Vishakha, I say she deserves this role. 
Vaise bhi mai nahi thi..
Now to the part IJHD update nahi hoga kya?? I want to but kya karu... 
I want to read that..Atlest TL to kar dho nah...TL ka monu pe depend... 
Did i ever use Thanks above ...Checking nahi  hua...  fine so I'm safeLOL hehe nai kiya :D

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

Koi gal nahi...
The thing is i must read one before sleeping 2day...


Hehe haan.. one toh you will be able to read.. 
 

Originally posted by asmaju

Just 5 pages nah Khushi..
We'll do it soon..


ho jaata but this net is really testing my patience.. 

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Alinaa-

Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"

No problem :D
They are.. Glad you like them!! 
Yes.. Didn't like the way they changed her character at the very end.. 
True there too. It was senseless at that time. No one would do that! 
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Khushi kaise bhi Monal ko mana lo plz Update ke liye...

And with Net puvho mat..
I went to office yesterday nd complained ...
meri sabar gayi thi..
I had to renew so mai complaint bhi kar ke aa gayi saat mai..



Edited by asmaju - 08 September 2012 at 10:59am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

ho jaata but this net is really testing my patience.. 

Relax...
I know how these things are nowAngry

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