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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 79)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"


Edited by -Alinaa- - 08 September 2012 at 2:35am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Kinda Filler-ish...but good none-the-less..!! waiting..!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
yayy!!! update finally i waited fr it till 2 am at night par nahi aya tha...

subah subah khola toh u hav updated it... thanx fr pm...
It was sumthing which v all wanted 2 hav in d3 actually bt leave it... at least u hav made it possible here.. loved it...Heart

u r an awesome writer i love all of ur works... rey's behaving like love stricken puppy was so cute i can imagine him like dat... i just got down d train in past ven rey used 2 b like dis all of kriyaansh cute scenes played in front of me..Day Dreaming


kriya sad hai plzz usse happy kardo na...Unhappy

lastly i loved reyam brotherly scene...



Edited by pallavi.14 - 07 September 2012 at 9:21pm

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
ah i can see twists coming up

please jaldi update karo khushi ji

cant w8 to read more

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
awesome update khushi 
waiting eagerly for d next part 
update soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
its awesome
liked it
u showed the story that wud have happened
hope ur guzarish is not based on bollywood guzarish.
*sigh*

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
wow khushi... i loved reading this part..
it was well written...
Sharon being nervous and Sharon thinking abt Swayam Embarrassed
plz update asap and thnx 4 da pm Smile

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