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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 73)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update
teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa 
pm me plzzz
hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deetha

hehe kal aake spam karoonge  abhi soyi nahi toh kal bohut kaam hai sab ghadbad ho jayega

hehe good night and have fun tomorrow Hug
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by namylovkriyansh

i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update
teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa 
pm me plzzz
hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

aww yes... enchanting scene.. even though sad... 
will do =D
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Vishaka in the scene
well this was not in the show
kash hota nayway i lovced the update
continue n update soon...

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
Khushi this is  not done..
When i was nt der u have updated and see the totla pages it has gone without my comment..
i'm feeling so bad..
Sari koso mere net ko...
And now to the update..
This part was gr8..
I dnt know agar yeah hota tho D3 kahi top mai hota..
Loved the way u protrayed the feel after dance.
he dance was special to Kriyaansh..
and so cherishing is isnt!!!
And the Reyam talk I serioulsy miss the feel sometimes eventhough they manage..
Sharon lka call de ke Rey ko Earth calling ho gaya.
How fair is dat!!!  Ha ha And She is nervous.It happens to all before any big event occurs..
Next comes the most avaited part..
Aaccha if i had gone by prev storyline I  would have assumed Kria wil cal Neha but with what I have seen pasat Kria's departureI would hug you here to add Vish.A true friend must say...
And then to all the gloroes who made her update Thanks a lot..
Vaise bhi mai nahi thi..
Now to the part IJHD update nahi hoga kya??
I want to read that..Atlest TL to kar dho nah...
Did i ever use Thanks above ...Checking nahi  hua...  fine so I'm safeLOL

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Jo koi bhi yaha par spam karing koi IJD par jao.Mere dil se duaye le lo..Waha bhi  use update le loh nah  plz...

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"


Edited by -Alinaa- - 08 September 2012 at 2:35am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Kinda Filler-ish...but good none-the-less..!! waiting..!!

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