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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 47)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
so difference yahin se dikh gaya...

accha huya shivam ko aise-vaise nhi dikahya..

i mea seedhe bolta huya dikhaya... MU abhi se hatva rhi hai lagta hai...

smriti ki dialogue delivery mast thi...

bahut sundar tareeke se u brought out kria's state..

sorry for short comment...

 know the reason...

update sajdaBig smile


Edited by kriyansh24 - 05 September 2012 at 12:06pm

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Originally posted by Born2Dance

Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Originally posted by Born2Dance

oh ohk...

n haan khushi...

me unresing by weekend like i told u...

ohk na????Big smile

nope. No problem Big smile
thanx fr understanding dear...

LOL don't be silly. Do I need to have Asma teach you lession of dosti mai no sorry or thank you's? Embarrassed
no need...Shocked

i already had dat lesson once...Ouch

ek aur nako...Tongue

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Originally posted by asmaju

unressed on page 45...


Eep!! Checking! =P

:)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

gai meri res:( ------=(

unres


Tough comp..
ha.. yea... 
Khushi loved the update.. yay :D
It was very shoert..
Nahi yeah size nahi chalega..
plz thoda aur bada kar dho..
Its too chotu..
I told u nah flow wil make it chotu.. hehe chotu laga..? Will try but no promise re.. it's hard as it is aur upar se i decided regular updating Tongue
Ab dek lo it seriously felt as 2 paras... haw, utna chota laga? Shocked 
And now to update.. this was superb cute...
Shivam koi use mar dho...
He wil be blasted if i see him.. hehehe Shivam hai... kisi ke bhi saamne ayega toh blast ho jayega.. let him stay behind curtains =P

Sorry for short comment bit unwell.. unwell? ki hua? abhi tak bola kyu nai?? Angry Go to sleep and rest na Hug 
Tc..

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
unresed,...

pg no.????????

arey haa 45...

1st cmnt...

asma...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
didnt i say a bit unwell..
Relax..It keeps on happening...

Pm check kar lo..

I'll go to sleep now..

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Born2Dance

no need...Shocked

i already had dat lesson once...Ouch

ek aur nako...Tongue

hehe good then you know the rules Hug
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Hmm.. So twists n turns r on there way.. Well yes.. M excited to knw whts gona happen next.. Do waitin for d next update:)
N i love d idea of bk to bk update as meri jaan nikal jati h jb sb update krte n phr..
Itna sara wait krna pdta h next update ka.. Dun tk it otherwise..
Actually d thing is,u all write so gud stories on kriyaansh tht i lost my patience of waitin fr d next part..
Hehe
N i liked d fact tht u startd d story frm this scene:)
Buddy req sent to Guzarish!!
Waitin :)

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