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#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 (Page 111)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Acha me going off to sleep..
Gud nit..

Deetha khayal rakh apna..

TtylHug

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Why in the world dint i receive a pm for this update???Ouch
coming to the update..
u have named it part 2...if m not wrong it should be part 3...
now to the contents of the update..
it was long enough...
Loved the twist you have got about vishakha knowing everything...
liked the way you described the situation too...
liked how u got sharon's worry about swayam through, with just a single sentence...
waiting to see how the smriti going for the competition gonna affect the future track...
m sure something happy our way thereTongue
please pm me next time...

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deetha

@laal batti...

waise rest lena hai par neendh nahi aarahi abhi sojaungi toh gayi meri body kal tak part part freeze hojayega...and u know practice ke waqt girgayi...my ( b*m) *embrassed* is paining a lot re...Ouch

Take care Hug
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Kinjal--

Res
unres

first time not feeling happy for commenting first...dint wanted to hurt any1 arey don't be sad <3

anyways

awesomee update khushi thanks! 

sweet and senti one...:)

ya its long enough...;)  hehe thanks!! Will try to make all parts around this length.. mark my words.. try Tongue 

so good to see atleast vishakha knows the truth... yes! 

She is really a true friend understanding her bestie's condition...

Hehe vish knows abt kriyansh... lol smart one.

I hope atleast rey gets to know abt the truth b4 she leaves... wait and see... 

Thats MOM...at times strict and then suddenly the sweetest...loved that daughter mother convo... true.. wanted to bring out that phase of a mother.. one that they butchered in the show! 

But The best part was...ur last line "this is temporary decision" rofl rofl!!
yaay...



pr - sorry asma

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreya19roy

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Nice update khushi...I really liked it Smile thank you so much dear!!! 

Thank god ki at least vishaka knows the truth Smile yes... if no one knew, it's suffocating! I loved how she being a true frnd supported kriya n respected her decision even when she thought that kriya shud tell everything to rey...bt I wud have liked it even more if she had given her some gyaan n made her do the others way round...lol I would have but kept it at minimal.. for now Wink She's a true friend indeed. bt wait wait wait, since this isn't a cvs show, so we most definitely know that kuch v ho jaye, future mein everything is gonna be fine so I can be fine with the fact that rey doesn't know anything yet Smile haha yes.. thank you for the trust Embarrassed 

Next update monday-tuesday?? Shocked arrey aisa kyun, deal toh daily update ki hui thi na toh fir aisa atyachaar kyun?? CryI know I know... every other day.. since I updated on Saturday, it should be on Monday now.. but Monday I don't get home until 8 pm of night.. after that, I'll also be having studies to do.. might not have the energy left to come and update.. Will try my best to Embarrassed
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SaruuKaSh-

Amazing!

Thank you!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

Acha me going off to sleep..
Gud nit..

Deetha khayal rakh apna..

TtylHug

Good night Hug Sajda awaits when you wake up ;)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaani2209

Why in the world dint i receive a pm for this update???Ouch
coming to the update..
u have named it part 2...if m not wrong it should be part 3...
now to the contents of the update..
it was long enough...
Loved the twist you have got about vishakha knowing everything...
liked the way you described the situation too...
liked how u got sharon's worry about swayam through, with just a single sentence...
waiting to see how the smriti going for the competition gonna affect the future track...
m sure something happy our way thereTongue
please pm me next time...

Because I haven't sent pmz yet Embarrassed My net was slow so it takes time.. I'm gonna be sending them in a few minutes Embarrassed 
lol again thank you for pointing out. Have fixed Big smile 
Finally long Big smile 
Thanks for loving the twists. 
Yes... For SwaRon, single sentences always does the magic... Not much needed Embarrassed 
Will do surely re.. just that I haven't sent any this time isiliye you didn't get one..

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