#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 - Page 82

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Res
unres

first time not feeling happy for commenting first...dint wanted to hurt any1 arey don't be sad <3

anyways

awesomee update khushi thanks! 

sweet and senti one...:)

ya its long enough...;)  hehe thanks!! Will try to make all parts around this length.. mark my words.. try 😛 

so good to see atleast vishakha knows the truth... yes! 

She is really a true friend understanding her bestie's condition...

Hehe vish knows abt kriyansh... lol smart one.

I hope atleast rey gets to know abt the truth b4 she leaves... wait and see... 

Thats MOM...at times strict and then suddenly the sweetest...loved that daughter mother convo... true.. wanted to bring out that phase of a mother.. one that they butchered in the show! 

But The best part was...ur last line "this is temporary decision" rofl rofl!!
yaay...



pr - sorry asma

Originally posted by: sreya19roy

*EDITED*

Nice update khushi...I really liked it 😊 thank you so much dear!!! 

Thank god ki at least vishaka knows the truth 😊 yes... if no one knew, it's suffocating! I loved how she being a true frnd supported kriya n respected her decision even when she thought that kriya shud tell everything to rey...bt I wud have liked it even more if she had given her some gyaan n made her do the others way round...lol I would have but kept it at minimal.. for now 😉 She's a true friend indeed. bt wait wait wait, since this isn't a cvs show, so we most definitely know that kuch v ho jaye, future mein everything is gonna be fine so I can be fine with the fact that rey doesn't know anything yet 😊 haha yes.. thank you for the trust 😳 

Next update monday-tuesday?? 😲 arrey aisa kyun, deal toh daily update ki hui thi na toh fir aisa atyachaar kyun?? 😭I know I know... every other day.. since I updated on Saturday, it should be on Monday now.. but Monday I don't get home until 8 pm of night.. after that, I'll also be having studies to do.. might not have the energy left to come and update.. Will try my best to 😳

Originally posted by: -SaruuKaSh-

Amazing!

Originally posted by: asmaju

Acha me going off to sleep..

Gud nit..

Deetha khayal rakh apna..

Ttyl🤗

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Why in the world dint i receive a pm for this update???

coming to the update..

u have named it part 2...if m not wrong it should be part 3...

now to the contents of the update..

it was long enough...

Loved the twist you have got about vishakha knowing everything...

liked the way you described the situation too...

liked how u got sharon's worry about swayam through, with just a single sentence...

waiting to see how the smriti going for the competition gonna affect the future track...

m sure something happy our way there😛

please pm me next time...

thank godvishakha is here atleast nd knw d whole truth... .:):) abt rey too...:p i always thought she notices evrythng nt lyk othrs jo apni lyf m bsy rehte h...:( temporary dcsn mns smthng is cookng in u'r head hoping 4 bst...:):) nd y i didnt got pm 4 2nd nd 3 rd part???? Pm 4 only first part ... That's nt fair yaar...:(:( nxt tym plzzz pm me whn u update...:):) hope u made positiv role of her mothr atleast here...:) she is a nicee mom...:):)

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

thank godvishakha is here atleast nd knw d whole truth... .:):) abt rey too...:p i always thought she notices evrythng nt lyk othrs jo apni lyf m bsy rehte h...:( temporary dcsn mns smthng is cookng in u'r head hoping 4 bst...:):) nd y i didnt got pm 4 2nd nd 3 rd part???? Pm 4 only first part ... That's nt fair yaar...:(:( nxt tym plzzz pm me whn u update...:):) hope u made positiv role of her mothr atleast here...:) she is a nicee mom...:):)

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

Well...

Clapping my hands together...

Dekh khushi mein Aa gai unres karne...

woohooo!!! 

Bt only dis one fr nw...

Sry fr Dat...😳

awww.. chal it's kay.. dusre jaldi kar diyo 😳

Well...

Cumin 2 d update...

Cn u please cum in my view rite nw...

Please...

Dar mat...

Tennu ek V A D D I waali jhappi deni hein...🤗

rofl!!! 🤗 

U jus penned my thoughts today...

I sooo freaking wanted something of this kind to happen...

glad you loved it! 😳 

Atleast someones hould have known and tried to stop our poor kriya frm doin Dat stupid thing...

yes.. someone should have known.. 

U no wat...

E1 though u kept smriti's condition...

I just loved her in ur update...

Wondering y...

Coz d way u portrayed d last lines of her wanting to see her daughters dance...

It just touched my heart...

yes.. it was most probably because of that 😳 I just wanted to show that Smriti is not at fault here for being strict to kria. She has her reasons (which will come later on). She is not the evil mother after all. No mother would think ill of her own kids.. 

I seriously can't wait for Monday now...

I really badly want to read the next part,..

Please jaldi update karna khushi... monday-tuesday 😳

*pout*

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Dusre????

Awesome update