#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 - Page 57

Originally posted by: deetha

hehe kal aake spam karoonge  abhi soyi nahi toh kal bohut kaam hai sab ghadbad ho jayega

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh

i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update

teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa 

pm me plzzz

hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

Vishaka in the scene

Khushi this is  not done..

Jo koi bhi yaha par spam karing koi IJD par jao.Mere dil se duaye le lo..Waha bhi  use update le loh nah  plz...

Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"
Edited by -Alinaa- - 11 years ago

Kinda Filler-ish...but good none-the-less..!! waiting..!!

yayy!!! update finally i waited fr it till 2 am at night par nahi aya tha...

subah subah khola toh u hav updated it... thanx fr pm...
It was sumthing which v all wanted 2 hav in d3 actually bt leave it... at least u hav made it possible here.. loved it...❤️

u r an awesome writer i love all of ur works... rey's behaving like love stricken puppy was so cute i can imagine him like dat... i just got down d train in past ven rey used 2 b like dis all of kriyaansh cute scenes played in front of me..


kriya sad hai plzz usse happy kardo na...😔

lastly i loved reyam brotherly scene...
Edited by pallavi.14 - 11 years ago

ah i can see twists coming up

awesome update khushi