#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 - Page 57

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by deetha


hehe kal aake spam karoonge  abhi soyi nahi toh kal bohut kaam hai sab ghadbad ho jayega

hehe good night and have fun tomorrow 🤗
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by namylovkriyansh


i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update
teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa 
pm me plzzz
hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

aww yes... enchanting scene.. even though sad... 
will do =D
Posted: 11 years ago
Vishaka in the scene
well this was not in the show
kash hota nayway i lovced the update
continue n update soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi this is  not done..
When i was nt der u have updated and see the totla pages it has gone without my comment..
i'm feeling so bad..
Sari koso mere net ko...
And now to the update..
This part was gr8..
I dnt know agar yeah hota tho D3 kahi top mai hota..
Loved the way u protrayed the feel after dance.
he dance was special to Kriyaansh..
and so cherishing is isnt!!!
And the Reyam talk I serioulsy miss the feel sometimes eventhough they manage..
Sharon lka call de ke Rey ko Earth calling ho gaya.
How fair is dat!!!  Ha ha And She is nervous.It happens to all before any big event occurs..
Next comes the most avaited part..
Aaccha if i had gone by prev storyline I  would have assumed Kria wil cal Neha but with what I have seen pasat Kria's departureI would hug you here to add Vish.A true friend must say...
And then to all the gloroes who made her update Thanks a lot..
Vaise bhi mai nahi thi..
Now to the part IJHD update nahi hoga kya??
I want to read that..Atlest TL to kar dho nah...
Did i ever use Thanks above ...Checking nahi  hua...  fine so I'm safe😆

Posted: 11 years ago
Jo koi bhi yaha par spam karing koi IJD par jao.Mere dil se duaye le lo..Waha bhi  use update le loh nah  plz...

Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"
Edited by -Alinaa- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Kinda Filler-ish...but good none-the-less..!! waiting..!!
Posted: 11 years ago
yayy!!! update finally i waited fr it till 2 am at night par nahi aya tha...

subah subah khola toh u hav updated it... thanx fr pm...
It was sumthing which v all wanted 2 hav in d3 actually bt leave it... at least u hav made it possible here.. loved it...❤️

u r an awesome writer i love all of ur works... rey's behaving like love stricken puppy was so cute i can imagine him like dat... i just got down d train in past ven rey used 2 b like dis all of kriyaansh cute scenes played in front of me..


kriya sad hai plzz usse happy kardo na...😔

lastly i loved reyam brotherly scene...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
ah i can see twists coming up

please jaldi update karo khushi ji

cant w8 to read more
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update khushi 
waiting eagerly for d next part 
update soon😳

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