#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 - Page 36

Originally posted by: asmaju

Kar le next time mai nahi chodungi apni jagah..

Originally posted by: deetha

res

unres

yay!!!!!!!!!!!! me first...

hehe...asma😛

hehe sadism at its best ri8????😆 You bet!!! 

waise now stopping my bak bak... 

waise meri babk bak teri thread keliye bachake rakhungi... You do that

coming to the update

i loved the fact u started from the end of the first thread

when most along with me start from the start of second thread... wait wait, me confused here.. explain first thread and second thread 😛 

u know it connects more...

now i may engrss totally into the story... I think I know what you mean but just so no confusions, clear kar do 😳

and as u said that back to back updates...

mera din acha jayega Hehee hope so 😳

and dnt want to spoil my mood on writing abt shivam... LOL DON"T write about him. 

u know all are waiting for a sweet update from me mai kuch bakwaas na likh dun... I don't want them all coming after me if the update goes bad =P

and smriti's anger is acceptable...if she has a past...

seems she has a past so i agree ... time will tell ;)

and kriya...aahhh!!!!!!!!!

it pains just to think that she is in pain... We can actually feel the pain...!

haa itna lamba chalega... na... daundega =P

thanks a lot for this update...

hope im compensating for not cmnt

for lyk every work of urs till now😳

Originally posted by: -SaruuKaSh-

Amazing part! Really enjoyed reading it, your the best writers out there! Can't wait for the next part. While I'm waiting I'll spam this thread. :L

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Hmm.. So twists n turns r on there way.. Well yes.. M excited to knw whts gona happen next.. Do waitin for d next update:)
N i love d idea of bk to bk update as meri jaan nikal jati h jb sb update krte n phr..
Itna sara wait krna pdta h next update ka.. Dun tk it otherwise..
Actually d thing is,u all write so gud stories on kriyaansh tht i lost my patience of waitin fr d next part..
Hehe
N i liked d fact tht u startd d story frm this scene:)
Buddy req sent to Guzarish!!
Waitin :)

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

so difference yahin se dikh gaya... hmm

accha huya shivam ko aise-vaise nhi dikahya..

i mea seedhe bolta huya dikhaya... MU abhi se hatva rhi hai lagta hai... yea...  everything to the point. ghumane ka koi fayda nai..

smriti ki dialogue delivery mast thi... hehe thanks.. 

bahut sundar tareeke se u brought out kria's state.. thanks for this too... Glad you liked those.

sorry for short comment...

 know the reason... no problem re!! 

update sajda😃 hmm lemme start replying to comments there tonight itself so I can update by friday the latest... 

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

You are compensating just perfectly 🤗 

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

NS taking ur thread for my update just this time coz asma di and dee yahin rhenge then mereko bolenge bataya nhi..

i updated the first chapter of new ff...

plus i scrapped u the link also...

padh lo...

Originally posted by: deetha

You bet!!! naah re baba na tujhse?

You do that hehe no need to tell

wait wait, me confused here.. explain first thread and second thread 😛 

i meant that...kriyaansh ki end tak 1st thread and re entry etc etc 2nd thread hope u get it...nahi toh chill meri dimaag aise hi ajeeb si track pe chalta hai

I don't want them all coming after me if the update goes bad =P lol!!😆

seems she has a past so i agree ... time will tell ;) agar nahi hua toh tu gayi

im learning still...😳🤗