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OS; FOREVER IN YOUR EMBRACE (Page 3)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
awesome job, loved it!

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Vasanti, no one would ever know this is your first OS.  You did an excellent job and I enjoy each and every paragraph.  You have caught the true spirit of both Arnav and Khushi.  I wish this could be a scene in IPKKND.  Beautifully written.
 
Thank you for post and pm.

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Loved this OS,
i hope they show something like this in the show..
you wrote it very well and i enjoyed reading it,
thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful...

I was afraid that he was going to be so involved with Di that Khushi would be able to just slip out of his life...

Thanks for giving me an Arnav who doesn't let that happen but confronts Khushi and wins...

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquiline

I love the choice of words you employ when writing a  story. I think that is what strikes em most. It helps bring out the depths and thoughts of a character with a more realistic light. Thanks for writing this and sharing this with us...A touching glimpse to what may unveil...
When I read comments like this it makes me feel so chuffed & happy- thank-you so much for saying waht you have- really appreciate itBig smile

Edited by VasantiLad - 03 September 2012 at 2:26pm

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fan_ipkknd1

Loved every bit of it! You should defo write more! Big smile
Loved the way you write, splendid! Congos on your first OS Big smile
Thanks so much - that gives me the encouragement to write moreWink
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rashika

Wow. I don't know what to say.
Very emtionally packed os.
It was Khushi's emotions that carried me through but I am glad that you could feel those through the words-many thanx Smile
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

OH WOW THAT WAS SO WOWIEE
SO AS IS USUAL SHE DECIDES TO LEAVE HIM SO HE CAN BE HAPPY BUT SHE KEEPS FORGETTING HE CANT LIVE WITHOUT HER ANYMORE
THAT WAAS BEAUTIFUL PORTRAYL OF ARHI'S EMOTIONS FOR EACH OTHER
FOR A FIRST OS THIS IS SIMPLY MIND BLOWING MAN
Thank-you so much for those kind words- its nice when everyone takes time to write something like this- its worth the hours that you spend writing itBig smile

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