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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dorindakate

That was beautiful...


I was afraid that he was going to be so involved with Di that Khushi would be able to just slip out of his life...

Thanks for giving me an Arnav who doesn't let that happen but confronts Khushi and wins...

Loved what you said at the end very eloquant - yes I did that - with writing these sceners you can make them do what you want - its great!! Thanx for the kind words😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yashi_arnav

OMG..Finally u did it...My dream came true🥳

Congrats for ur First OS😃

Today two surprises..First brilliant episode and then awesome OS by Vasanti👏
You are ⭐️. i knew it!!!!

Loved reading every bit of the story. 
Loved the depth of words. so emotional and heart touching😳
Loved the Monologue of Khushi.
Beautifully written and brilliantly executed .
Waiting for more stuff from u...

Yashi its cos of you that I wrote this piece - you critiqued it for me & you helped me with my Hindi which as you know is not as smart as it should be. Its improved with your tutoring though😛.
You have always encoraged me to write an OS & at last I did it!!!! Thanks for helping me today & as you know i always call you my...Star...you are my superStar...
I agree that it was an emotionally packed epi today😭 I now have to be inspired with an idea to write some more...take care...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am really very happy today😃
Finally u wrote OS😃
Thank u very much for mentioning my name😳😳😳
About Hindi - I am glad u learned the meaning of Hindi word 
Mayane from me and u tried to use it.😃
Now i am eagerly waiting for ur new OS/SS/FF😉

Originally posted by: VasantiLad

Yashi its cos of you that I wrote this piece - you critiqued it for me & you helped me with my Hindi which as you know is not as smart as it should be. Its improved with your tutoring though😛.
You have always encoraged me to write an OS & at last I did it!!!! Thanks for helping me today & as you know i always call you my...⭐️...you are my super⭐️...
I agree that it was an emotionally packed epi today😭 I now have to be inspired with an idea to write some more...take care...😃

Edited by yashi_arnav - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well written, and  a very pleasurable read 
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazinggg
thanks sooo much for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..seriously girl you write beautifully...heart whelming OS...loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome OS..
.i loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey beautifully written..
i loved it...
thnx for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
 
Right then Yashi YAAR ~(like Barun always keeps calling all those female reporters😆) ~ watch this space for the next installment!!
 
 
 
I am really very happy today😃
Finally u wrote OS😃
Thank u very much for mentioning my name😳😳😳
About Hindi - I am glad u learned the meaning of Hindi word 
Mayane from me and u tried to use it.😃
Now i am eagerly waiting for ur new OS/SS/FF😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Soloperson

Wow..seriously girl you write beautifully...heart whelming OS...loved it...


Thanx for appreciating😃