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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
I'm sad to say I'm utterly obsessed with this...I've got to say the way Devika's husband died has got to be the most hilarious but oddest thins I have ever read and I have read a lot of odd things...it took me a long time to ponder why this one sentence stood out to me Men viewed women as being creatures made for their comfort – for pleasure and for servitude. ...I still don't understand why but...but it somehow intrigues me...

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
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Wrong again. Arnav's dream.
Why though?
 
Why is he being exposed to dreams that clearly imply a woman's finding of her erotic nature?
It seems odd that he is attuned to the female, rather than the male. Hmm.
 
So she never consummated her marriage? At least, thats what the lines "never succeeded in stripping her" make me think. Holding on to that thought, this makes her untouched; like Kashi. Yet another similarity. She was a Manglik as well, was she? Or was she not? Her husband dying in that...ridiculously entertaining way. Pardon my jab at death, but it seemed to be inevitable.
 
But she was married nonetheless. I dont know why that thought shines so starkly in my mind.
 
What I marvel at is how distinctly you have portrayed Devaki. Before these dreams, I thought of her as a beautiful, volatile sorceress. Yet now she appears...a human.
 
I do hope that Arnav enlightens Kashi of these dreams. He is not well equipped to handle this myriad of unsettling and unnerving emotions on his own.
 
A gracious thank you for the consecutive updates, and for stimulating my lazy-as-crap mind.
Now I must concentrate on Chemistry. Unfortunately, my Honors book holds no mentions of clandestine rendezvous between Arnav and Kashi.
 
Wonderful Devi. I dont need to tell you that. Ever.
 
-Avinaash 
 
 


Edited by ArShifan1997 - 15 September 2012 at 4:20pm

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Devi
You are a Master of this craft,  Par excellence.  I really have no other word to describe your brilliance.   What a set of updates!  Wah!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
WOWW
this was arnav's dream!!!!
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Devaki's story from her own point of view is so heartbreaking, nobody ever understood her, her rage became her enemy, and people thought that she was different just because of that. The worst of all was her husband, who was impotent but still kept on blaming her...and forcing her. I feel sad, that her beauty made her so desirable, even though she did not realize it, but her beauty was the reason of women envying and men lusting after her. I feel sad, that the one power woman possesses over men, is what became her weakness.

But this man, this one man is making her feel everything she never felt, and is drawing him in so deep, the powerful forces of nature also cannot stop them.

"No woman has ever been more ready than you are for me in this moment'"  he whispered before he kissed his way up her palm and to the tip of her index finger.

This single line is so freaking seductive, it gave me goosebumps. So much power and intensity, I can feel.

Love the update...Thanks :)


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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
the dreams are truley amazing...love redaing about them...continu esoon
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
I am loving the dreams... The way Devaki was treated really angered me.. Brilliant update!
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
You leave me speechless D! what can I say? That you write beautifully...would be an understatement...
the dreams were so poignant! so Devaki and her mystery man are basically Kashi & Arnav respectively? Then what happened to Devaki's baby? and, how did Kashi's brother die? so many questions...keep writing D:)

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