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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
OMG Awesome... u are pooling us into a bottomless pit...be back after I read it  again...

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OMG!

Then, a few months after, her husband keeled over from a coconut falling on his head.  She had wondered whether she was quite human when all she had wanted to do was laugh when she heard of how he died. She had held her tongue though and of course the people at the illam had put her idiot husband's idiotic death on her head too.

ROFL I'm sorry but this is truly a great way to go! 

OK OK...you have officially created a means of invoking a myriad of human emotions in the space of a page...you should patent it!

Surprise and a smidgeon of smug pride when you said Arnav was the one dreaming (I knew it!), laughter (see above  ROFL), sadness, pity and disgust over the way the woman (it is Devaki!) was treated by her own family and by her in-laws and her truly inadequate husband...and Embarrassed appreciation for the very erotic encounter between the two later on...so hot! And worry because the spiteful cousin she denied was probably the one to take her child away (if the previous dream was a continuation of this)...

I loved the way he knew she had never been more ready for him..she had gone from resenting his presence, to relief, to curiosity and then disappointment at the thought of his absence. She stopped fighting him and her feelings and just let go...beautiful! 




Edited by moomin4455 - 15 September 2012 at 3:06pm

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Super duper confused!!

but loved ur writing

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You mesmerised me !
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Again I am going to wait till the dream finishes.. to get some semblance of it!
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LOVED UR UPDATE 
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
hmmm...quite intriguing...but will wait for this dream to be over before making any assumptions...
again needless to say very captivating scene between the two...few words with immense emotions...

Sad to say how males use females to mask their own weaknesses...whom they refer to as a weaker sex...such irony...dates may have changed but time has hardly moved till date...

well I can go on but I think its enough for now...good job!!

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will wait for the dreams to unfold..
:thank you

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