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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 9)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread...loved the update. While reading the update I felt like I was there on the scene when everything was happening, could actually see them running thru the woods. And when Arnav said  "I think I will follow you to the Land of the Dead if you asked me to." actually it gave me goosebumbs.
I have heard people saying aa tarvaadil  Aangalvarilla in kerala but I was under the impression that they meant it for the sons of that family as in the bloodline, but here I guess Kashi is scared and will push Arnav away...I really hope I am wrong.

Thanks for the PM 

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Congo on the new thread..and what an update..left me quaking all over..

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
I am having xm tody &nw i am resdn this.will cmmnt ftr xm.

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
sensational update...i went absolutely still when i read the last line ...

I think I will follow you to the Land of the Dead if you asked me to."  He whispered as he buried his lips against her neck.

She froze at his words, the ice effectively killing the heat.



I hope we will not get any sad ending and it is only a legend...

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congrats on the new thread.
 
this chapter really scared me,not bz of the superstitious aura,but the reality n truth of kashi's life shook me.i mean,despite being educated she beleived for a second in the curses.but cant she think one moment abt her father living still.i dont knw how to explain wat i feel.but i was releived wen kashi found out the psychological reason for such a behaviour of arnav.thank God.despite the curse n all  other things i had hope in 2 things-arnav n kashi.those two hopes wer shaked by this update.thts y i feel scared.
 
i dont knw wer u r taking this story nor wat wud be the ultimate end of this story.i dont hv any idea.but i had a hope tht superstition nvr wins over educated ppl.i dont mean God,but such ill superstitions tht makes life miserable.n i was happy arnav n kashi wer sensible,esp kashi.but now love is making her blind for his security n arnav,he has found something in his life for the first time-kashi!i hope she doesnt push him away thus pushing him into his dark life again.i really do hope with crossed fingers.
 
but i still hope,everything happens for a reason.arnav coming here,kashi's closeness with him,the superstitious aura there everything has a matlab.n i hope it is a good one.kashi wud hv either ended her life with the snake or struggled n led a dry life without arnav coming into her life.so wud arnav,by not coming into all this n meeting kashi.so i hope,i really hope it is of meaning for both of them.
 
n as i said i dont knw how u r planning to make the end of this story.i dont knw if its a happy ending or an emotional one or a freaking one,nothing.but i think as fate has brought them together,even if they hv to part their ways or die ultimately,i wish they hv a life like pallavi n her lover.let them enjoy the taste of pure love like honey n face their fate.i dont wish anything more from this story.atleast let them be complete in their life.let them love each other with abandon n realize pure love n live in it like pallavi,then kashi wud be able to attain the final navarasa-shantham.
 
n wonderful description of the 'sarpam thullal' dear.i've never seen one.but u hv described all so well.hats off.Clapn u cud describe arnav in trance n kashi's fear beautifully.even the kiss was decribed so sensually yet with grace

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
oh god... the superstitions have finally caught up with kashi. not for herself but for arnav, she has started believing them. i hope history doesn't repeat itself.

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
beautiful update...thank you.

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
congrats on thread 3... =)
this ff freaks me out but I can't keep away from it either...
Its mesmerising... <3

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