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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Again you managed to impress through your writing. The plot thicken with each chapter. Wonder where the story is proceeding. The man in her dream is surely Arnav, who else can dare to hold her by waist ;-)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
again an update tht make us spell bound.
 
y do i feel beyond somebody mentioning tht devaki lived centuries b4 kashi n arnav,tht arnav is her daughter or her varis?
 
this was my thot till i read this chap.but now i feel,tht arnav n kashi r re-incarnations?of devaki n tht man?
 
the striking similarity bwn their chemistry with tht of arshi's chemistry makes me think so.
 
the pond scene,though it was something magical or romantic(i dont knw if tht word is correct here) i felt afraid.yes,i felt so.i wanted to cry reading this update.
 
i dont knw y,but i cried.
 
n one doubt.it is lakshmi tht arnav is seeing right-the ghost?n kashi looks like lakshmi,thts wat arnav had found right?
 
but then y is his dreams filled with devaki?the reference made by kashi's father n mother proves tht they see devaki's energy in kashi,the same vibration in her.so as arnav has not seen devaki's pic,is he being misguided?wen he sees devaki's photo will he realize tht it is this woman tht he is seeing n kashi resembles her more?or am i wrong?
 
u nvr reply thro words,i knw.but i hope u wud reveal all of it in ur story soon.this story is touching me on emotional levels tht evn i didnt find out b4 myself.i often cry aftr reading ur updates or gets afraid.i dont feel ashamed to be frank.its a truth!
 
n one more thing,my crying or being afraid r not bad effect im saying abt ur story,but ur story has been able to reach me to this extent of disturbing my personal life n leaving me spell bound.its by all means a compliment.but yes as a reader,i want to share the feelings tht u arouse in me through ur writing.
kudos to ur writing skillsClap
 
n one word with devaki-u touched my soul,n made me cry,for wat?ur lonely life,or the flesh eating bas***ds who lusted aftr u beyond u being held as a witch?for ur unsaid emotions?or ur desire for tht MAN?i dont knw,I REALLY DONT KNW DEVAKI!
 

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
my vote.. this was not a dream, this was a flashback!
and what a steamy flashback yaar! on top of the ME, now i need a cigar!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
OMG !! pls tell me there is no rebirth track !! i'm going crazy by every chapter...
thanx for d pm...

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
FOXED!!!!!!...I am totally confused!!!...

Is dis the man whose the child is???...Whose dream is it!!!!! Sounds like Arnav's continuation of his earlier dream or rather dan an explanation to y d woman suffered...Is Arnav that kid??? or is Arnav related to dat kid somehow!!!!

I jst cant refer to anything m jst FOXED dats it!!!!!!!!...UPDATE d next part soon...please a humble request to calm my right mentally unstable dimaag!!!! Please!!!!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
one word... potent.

arnav's dream or kashi's or not a dream at all?

if its a dream logic would say kashi because she knew the ritual and again the burning of the sari of that woman -  devaki...

surprisingly how similar some events of their life have been...

kashi being manglik, thus a sort-off outcast

devaki being a sorceress, thus an outcast

the burning of devaki and arnav's sleeves, both of them in trance... 2 other people realizing what they are going through... uncanny, the same scene for both women.

the scene in the pool with kashi and arnav, physical + emotional awareness, feeling their thoughts??

the scene in the pool with devaki and the man, physical + emotional awareness, feeling their thoughts??

dream weaver... come and rescue me!!!




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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Woah that was breathtaking, I'm not sure if I was scared or enchanted but either way I held my breath many times while reading. Loved it, I wonder if it was Kashi or Arnav's dream and Devaki is a very interesting character, she had powers and this whole thing has become even more supernatural and I am addicted to this!Smile

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