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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 72)

Honkytonk Goldie

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Amazing updates as usual...stil can't believe that Arnav has only been at the house for a few days...feels more like a few weeks, with everything that has happened...glad that Arnav the news of his sisters eyes so well...maybe these two people needed each other to heal their inner demons and so fate conspired to get them together...other wise how they can go from hating to loving each other and needing each other in only three days????

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged

Fourteen years and the memory still as vivid as ever ...
 " She and her sister and her father had looked on from inside the hospital room as two hospital orderlies were restraining the boy as he yelled and screamed at the top of his lungs ...
" She had been haunted by that boy's screams for a long time ... "
"You are the girl who hung onto those window bars and watched me that day in the hospital."  ...
"It's like her eyes cheated death for eight more years before it was found out, hiding in this house'  And when death struck again, it was merciless. It took your brother too'"
had a very eerie feeling to it ...
Devi ... this chapter was so intense ... could almost feel his scream ... feel her despair ...
her helplessness in wanting to make things ok for him ...
Loved her parting words ...  "It appears that we are at a stalemate.  The only way to solve this is to avoid screaming bloody murder, Arnav.  So try that." LOL

Edited by Kishmish - 11 September 2012 at 11:39am

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ninand IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
if there's a god, he'd be the irreverent yet heartbreaking and beautifully insurmountable difference between love and logic.. both so apart ,both exist. an apparition of the balance which sustains life on earth would be Him..

 this thought isnt really in conjunction with the update.. maybe with only a part of it.
the love part.. my heart almost broke when he warned her off from coming to him ,and she , most plainly refused to heed by it..

her brother and his sister,,  these losses i just cannot talk about..

Edited by ninand - 11 September 2012 at 9:53am

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Svm465 Newbie

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
This chapter took my breath away, literally. I didn't realize until I heard myself letting out a big breath when I was done reading and felt my heart constrict. Simply amazing and heart wrenching.
ElenaElenor Senior Member

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
You know when you have a feeling that everything will crash, it will be torned; taking away from you. The buildup of emotions, the love, the language.
I liked how he was able to share his past with her, the same past he kept hidden and private. Something just for him; afriad of sharing the memories he thought he deserved. The hurt, the fears- they are still there but I am glad he did that.
I have said it again and again but how do you do it? I get transported to a mystical world as I read these chapter. Beautiful.

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nj.123 Senior Member

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Loved the update! The scream was heart wrenching, its just such a tangle of fates and tragedies and I really admire the way you have penned the story!Smile
apoorvaarnav IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
arnav's scream was so bone chilling.he finally let go of his emotions.
arnav and khushi share such a deeper bond also i like how she flatly refuses his demand not to see him!
loved it to the core!
please please write a proper novel! its gonna sell like crazy! when even stupid writers like chetan bhagat can become bestsellers , i think you deserves hell lot more accolades! you are in the leagues of great writers like RK Narayan ! you bring out the imagination in your readers !love it!
amritab Senior Member

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Your chapter headings are just as evocative as the chapters themselves.  Reading this chapter gave me the sense that perhaps there is hope for healing after all for Arnav and Kashi -  because of course he had to come to this house and live with Kashi and her family to exorcise his own demons and help her exorcise her own. After all, death is inevitable - his sister was not bound by any curse and yet she was taken from him just as her brother was.  They are bound in an inexplicable way - will they surrender themselves to that bind?

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