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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 71)

ElenaElenor Senior Member
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
You know when you have a feeling that everything will crash, it will be torned; taking away from you. The buildup of emotions, the love, the language.
 
 
I liked how he was able to share his past with her, the same past he kept hidden and private. Something just for him; afriad of sharing the memories he thought he deserved. The hurt, the fears- they are still there but I am glad he did that.
 
I have said it again and again but how do you do it? I get transported to a mystical world as I read these chapter. Beautiful.
 
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Loved the update! The scream was heart wrenching, its just such a tangle of fates and tragedies and I really admire the way you have penned the story!Smile
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
arnav's scream was so bone chilling.he finally let go of his emotions.
arnav and khushi share such a deeper bond also i like how she flatly refuses his demand not to see him!
loved it to the core!
 
please please write a proper novel! its gonna sell like crazy! when even stupid writers like chetan bhagat can become bestsellers , i think you deserves hell lot more accolades! you are in the leagues of great writers like RK Narayan ! you bring out the imagination in your readers !love it!
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Your chapter headings are just as evocative as the chapters themselves.  Reading this chapter gave me the sense that perhaps there is hope for healing after all for Arnav and Kashi -  because of course he had to come to this house and live with Kashi and her family to exorcise his own demons and help her exorcise her own. After all, death is inevitable - his sister was not bound by any curse and yet she was taken from him just as her brother was.  They are bound in an inexplicable way - will they surrender themselves to that bind?

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
You are doing a great job, such a lovely update. Waiting for the next update. Loved each character. Arnav-Kashi's conversations are beautiful.Keep writing. :)

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Wow... This is getting a lot interesting!!! How interesting their relationship has become!!

Devi, bow to you for your wonderful writing!! ClapStarSmileClapStar
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Devi..read the missed chapters in one go..i was truly spell bound..and lady you are freaking me out with the story and the narration ;)

And a very BIG THANK U for your PMs. I really appreciate it..

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I hope you update soon. You have turned me into a stalker!

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