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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 70)

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
venda venda ennu vechal sammathikulla allae? Ingane ezhuthiyal, njan engane comment cheyyathirikkum :)
I love this story. Deviyudae srishtikaludae prathyekatha ithanu, charactersinu superficial aya actionsum dialoguesum maathramalla. Allenkilum manushyar angane allallo...complex aanu n there are layers to their character. Athu ethra bhangiyaayitta ezhuthi phalipikkunae and at the same time there is a unique story line. Enikku thonnunu, ithoru movie aakiyal polum, directorinu ithra nannayittu athu kaanikkan pattilla.
Thank you Devi.
PS: Manglish kshamikkanam, it is habit I am trying to break...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Btw... the scream was chilling. I wasn't expecting it... n then suddenly! I was like I could hear him.

The pain...it was soo evident!

and I lovee it when Khushi calls out his name!
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
The Scream...how appropriate...a sound that is so guttural that waves of it colour the entire surrounding.
Who is living whose fate? Did Unni live Anjali's fate? Is KH influencing that of Arnav or is his entwined with Kashi's? So many questions to which there are no answers...yet.
She seems to have decided that she is going to see him safely through the week and out of KH sane...and may she succeed. Their's isn't a conventional love...and that is stating the obvious.

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
That was shocking...I didnt expect this from Arnav...
ur so gifted mA !
A pleasure to read...
Continue soon:)
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Amazing updates as usual...stil can't believe that Arnav has only been at the house for a few days...feels more like a few weeks, with everything that has happened...glad that Arnav the news of his sisters eyes so well...maybe these two people needed each other to heal their inner demons and so fate conspired to get them together...other wise how they can go from hating to loving each other and needing each other in only three days????

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Fourteen years and the memory still as vivid as ever ...
 
 " She and her sister and her father had looked on from inside the hospital room as two hospital orderlies were restraining the boy as he yelled and screamed at the top of his lungs ...
 
" She had been haunted by that boy's screams for a long time ... "
 
"You are the girl who hung onto those window bars and watched me that day in the hospital."  ...
 
"It's like her eyes cheated death for eight more years before it was found out, hiding in this house'  And when death struck again, it was merciless. It took your brother too'"
 
had a very eerie feeling to it ...
 
Devi ... this chapter was so intense ... could almost feel his scream ... feel her despair ...
her helplessness in wanting to make things ok for him ...
 
Loved her parting words ...  "It appears that we are at a stalemate.  The only way to solve this is to avoid screaming bloody murder, Arnav.  So try that." LOL
 
 


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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
if there's a god, he'd be the irreverent yet heartbreaking and beautifully insurmountable difference between love and logic.. both so apart ,both exist. an apparition of the balance which sustains life on earth would be Him..

 this thought isnt really in conjunction with the update.. maybe with only a part of it.
the love part.. my heart almost broke when he warned her off from coming to him ,and she , most plainly refused to heed by it..

her brother and his sister,,  these losses i just cannot talk about..




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This chapter took my breath away, literally. I didn't realize until I heard myself letting out a big breath when I was done reading and felt my heart constrict. Simply amazing and heart wrenching.

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