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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 7)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Omg...wat an amazing story...and you've written it sooo well...wow!
It transports you in some other world...
Great update...
Wat happened...how could he miss his sleeve on fire???!???!
Continue soon plz...love reading it!:D

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Congrats on the new thread
 
Brilliant update. His last line was really intense that he would follow herto the land of dead i wonder what the full reaction will be.


Edited by snoopy84 - 03 September 2012 at 4:30pm

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Congrats on thread number 3! 
Woah I was so freaked out when he was walking to the man and Arnav's sleeve went of fire..and oh my days the last line that Arnav said gave me shivers!
You write brilliantly!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
i was in a trance after i read this latest update...u really took me to the kaavu and sarpam thullall...and the last part, the bridge between desire, love and fear..was beautifully penned...i salute you devi for the superb creation of yours...

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WOW! I read that part over and oover and im going to read it again! too good just too good! but since I am not aware of all these traditions, in a little scared for arnav, I mean how could he not notice his sleeve catching fire? and why would kashi tell him to go away?
he would follow her to the lland of the dead! that was beautiful, it clearly kknocked the breath out of my lungs, completely uunexpected!
what has this house done to arnav singh raizada?

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Congrats..
Loved it.. :)

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awe totally creepy hope arnav can survive the curse...beautiful update...continue soon...

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Sensuous. This update is just awesome and I hardly have words to describe it. My skin is simultaneously on ice and fire. Their kiss was enchanting. It took me a moment to realise it happened. I didn't see it coming. Arnav is so into this place and Kashi and there is still some more time left. Kashi is also responding without any inhibition. 

I  wonder what you have in store for us. With you every update you weave magic where I am transported to the green lands and the magnificent house with all its stories and myths. The mysteries of the land unfold in each chapter and leaves me wanting for more. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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