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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 69)

barunlove Goldie
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
U totally outdid me wid Arnav's reaction...n den he wnts to sleep over it??? Y????? I jst cnt predict wt u would write next!!! u r jst too good with imagination...

U would find me stalking ur update smore often now!!!! Do i need to say i LOVED the update???

nimra21 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Oh wow. His reaction, the scream, the tears from both of them. Broke my heart. Powerful and intense update Devi. Please let these tortured souls find some comfort in each other.
shree99 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
i love this girl
'try not screaming bloody murder'...classic
If he has no control over his basic instincts and is going to scream.. then she has no control over her basic instinct and is going to chk on him regardless of what he has said...
u have put this across beautifully..
his well being has become her basic instinct
anuprika Senior Member
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
that was an unexpected reaction from arnav .but somewhere deep i wanted him to respond so.
 this story gets interesting.
what will happen now??
waiting.not bothering for pms.
i am STALKINGSmile 


Edited by anuprika - 11 September 2012 at 4:24am
charlie1950 Goldie
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
 Arnav sheer cry of loss,helplessness could b felt by us then 
Kashi must have felt more.
He wants to b away from all this and the only was is to sleep 
through it where u can't feel anything like dead sleep.
Kashi can't help but b there for Arnav for Arnav made her love him 
or the fate or life did
Kashi gave him the way out not to have her with him by not crying 
out loud but does Arnav have any control over it
Who have control over anyhthing that happens in ones life- NOONE
tanurocks IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
both of them sailing in the same boat...
Mansee Groupbie
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Cry for both of them ! .Period.
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
no words could describe..i felt goosebumps after reading the way you wrote his pain and kashi's soothing...

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