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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 61)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:32am | IP Logged
As I finished reading the chapterI was wonder what after she finishes this FF? It would be a tough act to follow this one iwth anything equally diverse and different.. but thats another thought, another day...
Love and hate are the two coins of the same side and Arnav and Kashi are bound together by so much more and of course the curse of the Kalarikkal House...

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
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Every time I read a chapter I get goose flesh all over ...
 
There is some uncanny connection between Arnav and Khashi ...
the constant fear in her mind that he may come to some harm due to the feelings she has developed for him ... is torturing her ...
 
"It must take a lifetime to be able to navigate this house without a map or light."  he proclaimed.
"Several."  She said.
"Several what?"
"Several lifetimes."  She answered, turning back to him suddenly, making him bump into her.
"The blueprint of this house is genetically encoded into us who live here; it's in our DNA, Arnav."  Her voice was angry now.  "How the hell will you ever learn?  How will all those strangers that you will have here to relax and rejuvenate ever learn?  This house doesn't take well to strangers, Arnav.  It never has and it never will!"  her voice ended on a shrill note."
 
 
And when he tells her about his sister donating her eyes ...
 

"She gave them away.  She gave them away to some boy who needed them.  I found out her decision the hard way.  There was a moment that day when I hated my sister.  Hated her truly for taking herself away from me and leaving something behind for some unnamed boy.  He and the family disappeared with the only thing left of her and I destroyed everything else."  just shocks her totally ...

 
She is totally overwhelmed with her emotions ... desperately wanting to believe that whatever he was dreaming about or encountering is all due to lack of sleep and proper rest ... but the fact that his sisters eyes were donated to her brother ... she realises that his being here was not merely a coincidence ...
 
 
"but she didn't believe in such coincidences' especially at the Kalarikkal illam. "
 


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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Devi, this was really sad. Kashi's realization of Arnav's identity  "that the same boy whose screams that had kept her awake all those nights when she was young was the same boy who was now keeping her awake by sleeping so trustingly on her lap",
was beautifully written. Her struggle to come to terms with the truth, her desire to let him rest as long as possible so that he would have the strength to cope with the coming revelations speak of the caring, giving nature that she tries to keep hidden under a veneer of cynicism. But despite her own newly realized feelings for him and the desire to explore this attraction between them she knows she has to tell him the truth even knowing it would cause him to leave Kalarikkal House, to "run from her".
And don't worry about PM's. I STALK...!!


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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Smiletoo many things in a day!!!she already told him.
this story is moving fast.
you clearly picturised her dilemma .i am loving this

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
omyygoddd!!

I did NOT expect Kashi to reveal it so soon.

I must say...I'm very proud of her!

and these last 3-4 chapters...omg I loved them!!!

There closeness...and just how much they are so comfortable with each other. 

and I love Arnav for confiding in Khushi like this.

Seriously...wonderful updates!

I loooveee this FF.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
What an update what an update yar..[/B] BEAUTiFUL

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u seriously have some sort of magic in ur writing
.m amazed.it was great piece of work.
The way thjgs progressed between them was remarkaBle.

Note:it was so breathtaking that iam out of praising words;-)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
WOW cliffhanger, I really really wanna know how Arnav is gonna react, Kashi's taught's about him running away from her and the fear was so beautifully penned.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Loved it... Read the last two chapters, Arnav and Kashi seems to have naturally accepted their feelings. I jst hope arnv reacts in a completely different way rather than wht kashi thinks

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