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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Now this is like that moment in a Grand Slam Final, Federer's serving, and Nadal's waiting at the other end, and the crowd hold their breath. 

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Loved  khushi's monologue! And finally she said it..I love her!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Beautiful, the way the relation b/w Arnav and kashi is maturing , one can feel the change and how well they understand each other. You writings mesmerize me. I am addicted to this ff and word are not enough to describe its worth. 

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Oh dont u worry upon the length...the message has reached the leecher for ur story in me...she told him the truth without fearing the consequence...dats what Kashi is all about!!! She ws afraid of losing him yet she let her burden go away to let him knw the fact!!! Loved the chapter!!!! It ws simply fabulous!!!!!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
And you have done it again.
I will not complain for a short update, because, you as an author dont like it and I as a reader, have no need to mention it.
 
Once again, what I noticed first in this part how scared Khushi is to lose him. She is terrified at the prospect of him running away from her. Its something that she doesn't even want to imagine.
 
Its the same thing I said in my earlier comment; she fears for his life, but she is selfish. Well, as selfish as any woman in love can get. She wishes, wants and needs to keep Arnav with her. Knowing Kashi, she will fight every obstacle that threatens to stand in her way.
 
This update was entirely about Kashi's emotions, but I wish to take a stab at what he was feeling. Her, running her hands through his hair would have both comforted and alarmed him. After all, this is Kashi we're talking about. The roudram is what defines her strength and weakness best.
 
But why does Kashi think that her sister and father wish for her to fall in love with Arnav? I apologize, but I dont really understand. Do they think that she is a sort...compensation for taking Anjali's eyes away?
 
The only thing she talks about her father doing is having his son take the eyes from Anjali, right? Or is there a deeper meaning here?
 
The last line is the character of Kashi in her true form. Giving in to the truth, but not with the "let go" attitude. She is naturally defensive, and in order to not get hurt, she is preserving that attitude.
 
With those lines that she has in sorts...thrown at Arnav's face; I wonder what is to become of it?
Will he understand her intentions? Her vulnerability, her fear?
 
Wonderfully done as always publicenemy. I look forward to understanding more.
 
Continue soon,
Cheers,
Avinaash

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Devi,
Wow! You are churning out updates at fast speed and of course we are not complaining!
 But you left us on a cliffhanger dear..
 Making us impatient to know what's Arnav's reaction going to be.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Oh...god kasha is such a beautiful character...makes you fall in love after every update...
Great update...so she said it...I can't wait to see arnav's reaction...

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daljeet

now im seriously confused with this chapter.can anybody help me here?

loved the warmth n extent of arshi's relationship here.he laying his head in her lap n confessing his dream n past to her was so much.it means a lot.

will kashi take him to the pooja room in nxt update?will she reveal it or keep it secret?will this make arnav repel kashi?

y only arnav can see the ghost?one doubt,anybody plz tell me.he saw the ghost of lakshmi or devaki????

 


There is one more update on page 54 where she has already revealed the truth of the eyes to Arnav

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