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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moomin4455

I so wanted to comment several chapters ago but real life is refusing to behave!!

I feel I'm enveloped in mist walking cautiously, step by step, on this journey with Arnav and Kashi. Sometimes apparitions appear looking to lead me on a false trail; other times I see glimpses of something beautiful and tangible that I hope are showing me a way out of this haze but they quickly recede. And just when I feel hopelessly lost, I hear Pallavi playing her veena, sit down and take respite...this is how your story makes me feel!

The strange thing is I wouldn't want to be any where else!

I loved the lucid Arnav two or three chapters back - very much a glass of cold water in the face after the trance. I felt comfortable, as I'm sure Kashi did, hearing Arnav be himself. I do agree with Pallavi: life is short and Kashi should give in to her feelings. I also agree with Arnav, that maybe the fear that Kashi has is misplaced. You can follow the trail of 'evidence' that is one's family history, culture, superstition, gossip and chinese whispers etc and lay it out in many ways to convince people using any argument you like. Was Arnav's dream something of the past of Kashi's family? Or was it a natural reaction on hearing about a young woman who could not be accepted because she couldn't cede to the societal attitudes and mores of the time. Is Arnav in danger? Was Anjali the one with the ill fate? She gave her eyes and also gave death!? Who on earth knows anything about anything at Kalarikkal House????? No one's viewpoint is free from bias...


Its past midnight here. And I am a new reader of KH. I have just read the first and last update. But your comment is enthralling and its giving me this weird palpation in my heart which is definitely not healthy.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
fab updates :)))

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Great update its great how he is opening up to her now seems like shes made the connection

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
There seems to be a kinship afforded to the personalities of Shivan and the house.. though not apparent , the nightmares seem to be a confluence of the two.
.. maybe  everything intangible and unresolved is Shivan, who , if not older than the house, has at least outlived by many decades the generally known lifespan of his reptile(a match to the measure of time withstood by kalarikkal house). and everything that occurs ,and is distinct (in how indelible a mark it leaves behind), and in a way, out of one's control, is the house..
Shivan protects who he loves, and the house does not let leave, those it does.. 
it enthralls when you imagine shivan in the forest which is teeming with life, and vitality.. and the house, seeped in the emotion of its inhabitants, its air, brilliant from the notes played and danced to, or from the cries and whispers which rang in her halls..
.. it feels natural that Arnav have barely a lucid  moment there, and they fall so hard for each other.. so soon(since we already have dispensed with time being of any importance in a 'state of being' anyway)

and then some of these moments you describe, make me reject all  concrete contexts, and simply reflect on how beautiful they are.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
it actually leaves an ache in your heart! im sat here with a feeling i cant even begin to describe.
 
the connection between these two is just getting stronger and stronger, am so glad that its more than just physical but an emotional and somewhat spiritual one too. im still confused as to what is happening, seems like another mysterious world entirely!
 
How i wish i had a quarter of the talent you possess for writing so i could do justice in praising you. You really are an incredible writer who invokes so much in her readers!
 
thank you for the update

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand


.. it feels natural that Arnav have barely a lucid  moment there, and they fall so hard for each other.. so soon(since we already have dispensed with time being of any importance in a 'state of being' anyway)

and then some of these moments you describe, make me reject all  concrete contexts, and simply reflect on how beautiful they are.

This is so true! It seems like time is just irrelevant at KH...and yet it feels no natural for Arnav to lose himself to well...himself and to Kashi so easily. It also feels natural to try and have an explanation for it all, and to finally give in to the mystery and beauty! I love your comments - they seem like a natural extension to the story...very evocative and poetic!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand

There seems to be a kinship afforded to the personalities of Shivan and the house.. though not apparent , the nightmares seem to be a confluence of the two.
.. maybe  everything intangible and unresolved is Shivan, who , if not older than the house, has at least outlived by many decades the generally known lifespan of his reptile(a match to the measure of time withstood by kalarikkal house). and everything that occurs ,and is distinct (in how indelible a mark it leaves behind), and in a way, out of one's control, is the house..
Shivan protects who he loves, and the house does not let leave, those it does.. 
it enthralls when you imagine shivan in the forest which is teeming with life, and vitality.. and the house, seeped in the emotion of its inhabitants, its air, brilliant from the notes played and danced to, or from the cries and whispers which rang in her halls..
.. it feels natural that Arnav have barely a lucid  moment there, and they fall so hard for each other.. so soon(since we already have dispensed with time being of any importance in a 'state of being' anyway)

and then some of these moments you describe, make me reject all  concrete contexts, and simply reflect on how beautiful they are.

Shivan is by all approximations a little more than 25 years old.  The average King Cobra can live up to 20 years.  So, yes, he has lived longer than most... but decades maybe a stretch... :)  In our minds, though, you would be right... the creature does appear to have lived forever... since the beginning of time, it seems to me at times...

p.s. your broke your 'every other' pattern ;)

-Devi

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by ninand

There seems to be a kinship afforded to the personalities of Shivan and the house.. though not apparent , the nightmares seem to be a confluence of the two.
.. maybe  everything intangible and unresolved is Shivan, who , if not older than the house, has at least outlived by many decades the generally known lifespan of his reptile(a match to the measure of time withstood by kalarikkal house). and everything that occurs ,and is distinct (in how indelible a mark it leaves behind), and in a way, out of one's control, is the house..
Shivan protects who he loves, and the house does not let leave, those it does.. 
it enthralls when you imagine shivan in the forest which is teeming with life, and vitality.. and the house, seeped in the emotion of its inhabitants, its air, brilliant from the notes played and danced to, or from the cries and whispers which rang in her halls..
.. it feels natural that Arnav have barely a lucid  moment there, and they fall so hard for each other.. so soon(since we already have dispensed with time being of any importance in a 'state of being' anyway)

and then some of these moments you describe, make me reject all  concrete contexts, and simply reflect on how beautiful they are.

Shivan is by all approximations a little more than 25 years old.  The average King Cobra can live up to 20 years.  So, yes, he has lived longer than most... but decades maybe a stretch... :)  In our minds, though, you would be right... the creature does appear to have lived forever... since the beginning of time, it seems to me at times...

p.s. your broke your 'every other' pattern ;)

-Devi

i meant in that way a bit.. if a snake has lived Kashi's entire life, it kinda gives that feel..:)

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