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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 5)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Congratulations on the new thread Devi. I'll be back with a proper comment, because I'm rendered speechless by this chapter, terrific <3

Though it reminds me strongly of the River Kaveri and the contrasting Land of Death. Sigh, thought evoking. 

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
I hereby solemnly promise to dutifully stalk the new Kalarikkal House [3].

Eerie is the word for this chapter. You are on a high and have taken me there too. This one is going to make me wonder and think and try to rationalize for hours. When will you stop surprising us, lady? Never, I hope. I too will follow you to the Land of the Dead for updates like this.Clap

I might come up with something sensible later. As of now, this is the best I can do.


Edited by merit - 03 September 2012 at 1:39pm

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Hi !!  Came across this FF just now ... and its seems  as very  intriguing story ...  ,so I am off to read this from the start .. Will comment after reading this ... Smile 

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
it feels haunted... so many subconscious thoughts floating around...

she has begun feeling for him... she is no longer cold towards him... thats why she wants him to leave before anything happens to him!

she had compromised with her fate.. but when she picked up the baby she felt a longing ... she knew she would never be able to have one...

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread!

interesting chapter.. so Kashi believes in the supernatural.. or does she feel so much for arnav that.. she can let any harm come to him.. not matter what she believes?!?

I like where this is going.. both are falling.. and falling hard for each other!!

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Aarya-

Originally posted by ninand

I didnt think I would want to proceed any further from :

''She wondered if all women had foolish hearts that melted at such emotional drivel as a man trying to correctly pronounce their dead brother's name. ''

all the rains, and storm, and banana leaves and vines around the strangely sacred ritual, men and women loosing sense of what God must be .. and it has to be the upheaval inside him that decided that only what he didn't understand could numb him.
 there's aching tenderness in Kashi asking him to leave.. and an equally tender hope, that the man with all his vulnerabilities would be the one to bring the soul of the place to rest.
the cold brought about from the rains, the wetness, numbness and fear was so real.. i can almost breathe it in through my skin.
you write so well.


Spoken like a true romantic ;)


i like that thought..

and, Hello.LOL

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
it was amazing...dis story is geting oll d more interesting wid each update...Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread !
Kashi's trying to send him away .. Is that because of the curse ?
It was a great read :)

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