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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
OMG!! I just loooved this update.

Especially...the last two paragraphs. My god.

You write beautifully!

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You write tender moments so well.Clap


Pinnem pinnem vayikkan tonnum!

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So... My mother told me that she was SICK of my head buried in some textbook or the other... And has hence locked my books up, telling me that she'll return them tomorrow. And either ways... My dark circles scare her. Remind her of the ghost she saw hanging in her father's ancestral village. They scare her. Ghosts. Which brings me to the update.

The highlight of this update would be when he tried to pass the absence of the ghost as an attempt to trick her. Something in the way it was written... It struck a chord. Showed me a chink in the armour. Its was so beautifully put. Amazing.

So, it finally hit Kashi. Her connection to Arnav. Now you have me jumping up and down... I'm just so... Nervous. Will this burn the bridge between Kashi and Arnav? Or will it strengthen it? I dont know. It is nevertheless nigging the back of my head. Kind of like when Dumbledore decided to drop in at the Dursley's house. And then he offerred them "madame rosmerta's finest oak matured mead" or something like that. Do you remember? And do you remember how the glasses kept bouncing off their skulls? This question is nigging the back off my head... Somewhat like that.

They have come such a long way from stiffling their crackling chemistry to openly acknowledging it. Arnav and his UNDERSTANDING of his need for Kashi... and his hope that she understood it too... That was also a huge plus point for me.

This was... Simply put- brilliant. Also... The last chapter... Never commented on it, did I?

The last chapter was also pretty amazing. What struck me was how he... Weaved Kashi into his dream. The dream was eerie... Spooky... Trust me... As I type this... I can here the woman's pleas to let them
See her child. I am in love with your writing... Was he dreaming of Devaki? But I don't remember him knowing of Devaki... Or maybe I missed it.

Great chapters.. Thankyou for the PM! And ignore the spellings. Typing from a phone is NOT easy. :|

-V

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
enjoyed reading d update...i wonder whether Arnav really saw a supernatural thing..a rational mind refuse,while  d religiously molded inner self accept it.. cant wait to see what await us readers in coming updates...Smile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
its way tooo beautiful... 

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The way the story is going, I hav this feeling that something bad is going to happen..
So finally kashi came to know the connection between his sister and her brother...
This story is hauntingly beautiful... Amazing chapter!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Every time. Every single time. How do you manage it Devi? Beautiful writing. 

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
too beautiful.i am simply wordless.
so he shared his past eagerly waiting for what change this is going to bring in their lives

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