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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Simply beautiful update.  Complex as always but yet so clear.  

Arnav's realization of his need for her, his hope that she realized it too was so eloquently described.  Kashi seems to realize her feelings too specially after her discussion with Pallavi.  Hence she worries about him.  What a beautiful confession of sorts to each other, communicating their need, their fears.  

The ghost that he sees, don't know why but I feel, her salvation is in getting these two together.  The ghost had an incomplete love story and hence remained in limbo.  Waiting to see more in the future.

Kashi realized who he was tonight. Fate plays strange games, indeed.  Glad he was able to sleep deeply with his head on her lap.  In a way, she is also his salvation from the demons of his past.

You are a very complex writer.  I cannot tell you how deeply this story has its claws in me.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
this was a big step ahead in their relationship...arnav and Kashi realising and not running away from their feelings...awesome but the snakes and dreams are scaring me a lot...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Great update ...I am glad that he shared his past with Kashi and can't wait to see how Kashi would react.

Thanks for PM

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If only you could have seen me while I was reading this update, My laptop was in front of me or my bed; but by the time I finished reading, my eyes were literally an inch away from the screen...

Will come back later.. Too many thoughts in my head right now.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
part 38
awesome...
Arnav saw her again...
and Kashi now knows that twas his sis who donated her eyes to her bro...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
My god...I'm having goosebumps!!!
Okay y couldn't he see... He told her about his dream...
That was an amazing update!
And you are one hell of a writer!!!! Loved it!!!:D

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OMG!! I just loooved this update.

Especially...the last two paragraphs. My god.

You write beautifully!

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You write tender moments so well.Clap


Pinnem pinnem vayikkan tonnum!

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